No title for love.

Baby
I'm starting to lose my sense of humor
starting to distant me from you
hun, that's just a rumor
I can't get you out of my head
inoperable tumor
please understand me now
If sometimes you see I'm mad
I seem out of it
out of my mind
seem up to be no good
please don't misunderstood
I still give you my all
as much as I could
as much as I would
only one girl will be good
I ain't birdie-ing 18 holes
f**k tiger wood
seems to be a while
for me to write for you
please, let me explain
I miss you like the eternal flame
cheesy all over, cheese filled hurricane
writing the street poetry of lil wayne
but I ain't lil, it doesn't fit in my name
havent been writing
so I gotta brush off that rust
later, I will fantasize of brushing off your bust
oh scary
baby, your extraordinary
you are my hail mary
my golden berry
soul that I carry
love you most, more than very
sometimes
feelings can't be described
memories can't change, can't be bribed
all you're personal issues, I plan to subscribe
baby
I am just lost without you by my side
It ain't weak to admit
that you are lost cause you love someone
It ain't whipped
just because you plan to commit
through you.
I learned to be better
hope you call me later.

Reviews

[Legion]

Not as good as some of your other stuff, but not bad.

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Awesome.. loved the feel and flow of this! Very creative with very much of today's lingo creatively meshed in.. very lyrical with some great lines in here! A high acceptance of another's issues (which we all have).. YOU plan to subscribe! I loved that.. cause you know it's part of what made this person everything you love and adore. Ending with not being whipped to commit to love.. becoming a better and more open person.. ready and embracing all of who they are! beautiful!