If you remember me

Hello Hello..

Let's see if I remember this
How to write a couple of diss
Hey,
That little skirt wearing miss
Come and gimme savior a kiss
Be my rihanna
And I'll be your chris

Small cuts all over your head
Drive away as you still bled
Linda prob phone me after she read
Starting to get afraid
That savior has gone crazy instead
These rhyme ain't breaking me a sweat
Staring me beside, my beloved pet
Staring at my bill, I'm deep in debt
My puppy is sick
Took him to the vet
Can't pay for the med
So I killed that doc in the shed
Burned him off with a cigarette
Videotape to show no regret
I'm now more famous than balloon boy in d net
Now my priest getting upset
Karma will strike me he said
But I ain't feel nothing yet
Lets make a bet
Get that Russian roulette

Click

I'm still alive
Now it's your turn pastor
I see your pants are getting wet
That's as fucked up it get
But I ain't swinging like that

Here, R kelly's number
I don't know him
It'ss just my refer
I like my girl mature
Maybe that's just my own prefer
Mr pastor
With his trojan rubber
Cleaning tighty whity in his washer
Put away the bible
Turn into the salad tosser

Little boys got kelly all high
Came all over now he believed he could fly
All pedophiles deserve to die
Maybe I should just turn jew
I heard they killed our lord
Their repaying life with limited girls to screw
It's all jokes, nothing is true
I'm just messing around
Before I do what I do
I'll try it on you
Inject them b*****s with the flu
Watch them mutate
Ss I try on their shoe
What am I talking about?

I don't have a clue

Don't have a clue

The rap now got average
Can no longer rap like the savage
All my victims bleed in the sewage
Hobo's endorsed beverage
You'd prob think it can't get any worse
Verse after verse
I can see that your nervous
But I barely scratch the surface

Call the medic
So you'd kill the nurse
Take all the I.D. off her purse
Don't wana drop a hint
Even sanded off her finger print
If i get caught, i just say i didn't
Police try harder everyday
No d.n.a.
No motive portray
Autopsy delay
Soon the case just faded away

Continue to bury my yard
No one hears your scream hard
No one passes the scarecrow guard
See you in hell
Give george bush my best regard
Give my alibi to the cop
He turned around and I started to chop
The killings will never stop
Until I have enough for my dumpling shop

Yea, thats my newest project
Running away from the radar suspect
Head skulls add to my collect
Blood gushes got me to erect
It's just fun freestyle
What you expect
If you'd forget
This is where you'd give your respect
I hope now we can connect.

hello.

hello.

Reviews

[Anna]

I didn't like it. I say that only because it's not my scene. You write beautifully!! Great imagery and rhythm.

[Gabriella]

Love this poem, it has incredible meter and I can practically hear it. It's disturbing and angry and awesome at the same time. The only thing that bothered me is that you don't capitalize some names but that you do capitalize the beginnings of most likes. Maybe you have your own artistic reasons for doing so, but I just happened to notice that it wasn't quite consistent. Good job with this, savior, I look forward to reading more of your work.

[Legion]

Tripping by the graveside. What a strange piece, but very interesting. Kudos.

[Jasmine]

wow. really disturbing but extremely well written and gripping. awesome poem :)