Resident Evil.

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When miracle rescue no longer comes to mind
Fear in the air got you blind
You are to yourself, but not alone
Surrounded by the undead, the unknown
They come to you if you scream, so don't

So they said it was a freak of nature
Evacuation soon as possible assure
But why am I all alone while evil lure
They bitten my neighbors, and I hear not a cure

Holding a bat as my last defense
I see soulless undead that look like my friends
Hear that footsteps walking towards me
Got me in high suspense
Blood stains all over the room
The smell of death is strong as perfume
Darkness covers the sky, forecast gloom
Is this judgment day, or is this doom
Television was telling us to stay put at home
Lock ourselves in while the undead roam

Now all the cables are out, further notice till then
Unlike the virus, my nerves must be contain
There's a gun in the other room I must obtain
Must get there while they are eating my teacher's remain
Note to self, when attacked, always shoot them in the brain
Oh six sense, I can see where I'm heading, just tell me when

The hunger for the living fills the morning wake
I will run, and not turn back, no stupid mistake
They notice me now, but I will not break
Reload that gun, human survival is at stake

The silence around town is deafening
No screams, just lifeless bodies still breathing
The mist is covering my sight in front of me
Tip towing my step, no longer surprised at each scene I see
Having to kill my friends, my family
Overwriting sweet with this painful memory
I stand alone, fighting for humanity

Fighting till my last loaded shell
Sole purpose is to get out of this hell
They call it doomsday, but I'm not through
Umbrella, I am coming after you.

Reviews

[Faith]

this poem is very deep, the imagery was used perfectly.
you really did a great job with getting the feeling of fear in your write.
loved it.

-faith♥

[Jae]

the games are way better than the movies, since the games came first. they came from japan and they were called Bio-Hazzard. but to have them in the usa they had to change the name. the movies dont follow the games watsoever, but they r still good. oh and cool peom by the way. lol. nice job. and as the person who commented below me said. u really hsould stay away from forcing a rhyme.

[Legion]

Love those movies. Haven't played the games yet. Not too bad of a poem. Some of the rhyme is a bit forced though. Try to stay away from that. It puts the reader off (especially if it is done often). Good story though.