Party Up!

Just a simple lyrics I wrote. Don't come back with heavy critics !

You need to party!
Drop the act, let yourself be
It's way pass sin hour of three
Time to show that inner beauty
Not caring the outer side, set yourself free
Don't care what you say, I'm gona be me


Savior's turn now
I'm back to my bullshit
'Together we stand' a classic, now this is the party hit
Don't be keeping that money in the bank
I say party up! for once, leave that mind blank
forget about class and rank
Girls do as I say, or receieve the player's spank
Yoo! soulja boy is here to crank
No one likes a party pooper lets be frank
Lets make that boom boom pow like a tank
Loosen up that waist, you have me to thank


We don't care no politics, this ain't high school
Party up! either be the party or be the tool
Let the roof burn down, we adding the fuel
Kingston go call 911, we jumping in the pool
Show some skin, don't be cruel
Let the girls see your precious jewel
Ignore insecurity, chill with me and your cool
Splash some party mix, don't take a shot, we make it dual


You need to party!
Drop the act, let yourself be
It's way pass sin hour of three
Time to show that inner beauty
Not caring the outer side, set yourself free
Don't care what you say, I'm gona be me


I'm all wet but still glow with flare
Now tell me that deep crush, thats a dare
Whisper me something that you never wanted to share
We all know how life is so unfair
So take this time out, party up, no more self aware
It's for all, so we ain't talking about no one's pair
Dance a little, blast tat music, your mind does its own repair
All hateful and venom must be checked out in declare
Only party people allowed, so others beware
Haters can't party like us, so they just stare
No dear, I ain't talking about you girl, I swear
But you could use some party in you, cause I care
We party here, party there, smiling popping everywhere
So I say party up! move those hips, swing that hair.

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

Oh just great ,loved the last lines a lot..
We all know life is unfair,So party up no more self ware
Its for all ,we aint talking about no one pair
All hateful and venum must be checked out in declare
Haters cant party like us,so they just stare
I really loved the free spirit here..
lovely write..

[Joel Alvarado]

This is pretty good, it really has the feel of a party as your reading. To be free spirited and wild I guess is the point lol, in that it was clear. Nice job. It also has this rap like feel to it, thought that may just be me. Good job!