Grandpa.

Before the next line arrive
This note is to celebrate my Grandpa's life
six children, seven grand children, life with loyal loving wife

Born in 19 thirty three
2009, he was called upon by the Big G
leaving the world with his lasting legacy
without him, there wont even be a ys lee

He was The warrior
He was way harder than all the street rapping gangsta
Survived through world war
he told me the time the Japs chased him from the door
feeding his brother with foods hidden under the floor

I did not know much about what he went through
He played a big role during my childhood
I'm dropping so many tears for him, I knew I would
I'm thanking him for everything, I know I should

Let me have one last conversation with him over breakfast
Let me have one more moment with him relive our past
I apologize for not understanding him
He might be gone, but his image is never dim

I look up above, releasing thousands of liquid piece
Grandpa, this note is for you.
Rest in peace.

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

Oh how I loved this my friend ,I ve always respected those who lived to see so much old age
to see through the years,through their burdens,how much those eyes must have seen
and yet was so patient..this new generation ,I am sorry to say they dont appreciate that
I loved everything that you wrote about him ,but these really touched me..
He was the warrior,dont know much about what he went through
Dropping many tears for him..I thank you for everything
Let me have one more moment to relive our past
I apologize for not understanding you
you are gone but the image is never dim..
What loveliness ..he must ve been a great Man ,i am sure
lovely write

[Joel Alvarado]

Man this is good. I actually felt like that when my grandfather passed 3 years ago. I didn't take the time to get to know him and part of me wishes i had. Nicely done. And welcome to writerscafe. I'll be reviewing more of your work shortly. Great job!

[saviorys]

hahaha, I appreciate it lots that you review so many of my writings!
thx a million. I'm still new to this whole writing thing....
lol, your 'new generation' is my generation!