I Hear Voices.

I hear voices.

Tick Tock
Can you feel my pain?
Tick Tock
So who are you to complain
With me around you, you have more to gain
Never bothered knowing what drives me insane
All i do is walk the rain
Drop by drop, my emotions down the drain
The hatred in me, i cannot explain
The sadness in me, i cannnot retain
The happiness in me, is an abstract again
The obssession i seek, was worse than when i did cocaine
The voices I hear, stuck in my brain
They talk to me, wanting me to jump off the train
The savior is gone, while the evil reign.


Tick tock
Can you feel my failure?
Tick tock
Who are you to say you have the cure
All you people do is tell me to be mature
But I spit better than you mutherfuckers, that's for sure
People fake it, worship that unreal culture
It's okay savior, the place is secure
No haters within 100 feet assure
No harms that you cannot endure


Click clock
Can you feel this round is mine?
Click clock
I was about to shine
But the player was forced to resign
Billed by duties assign
I declare, I am not fine.
Save me, cause there's a click
but no clock this time.


I no longer care my effort ain't enough
I no longer pretend to laugh

I no longer hold my bloody tears
I no longer end my night with prayers

I no longer want to cure my insomnia
I no longer want to stop my anorexia

I no longer care for noises.
I only hear voices.

Reviews

[Ben]

This is good. You should capitalize your 'I's, though. Good job!