What You've Done

 

Always seeing though me, ignoring I'm in pain.

I can't believe I loved you. Now, I'm so ashamed.

Your burning, searing, promises burn out within the night.

I was always left with nothing, except the urge to fight.

I wanted to bring you down with me, let you feel the pain too,

And when you dug in deeper that's exactly what I'd try to do.

There is no excuse now, for what you did to me.

You'll never understand it. Your just too blind to see.

Your heart runs on simple pleasure, your soul runs on all the lies.

This is how you live each day, seeing no problems through those eyes.

What you did was painful. Believe me, I would know,

And no matter how much time passes, I refuse to let it go.

Reviews

[T.K. Bruhn]

Nice poem. It flows very nicely and the rhyming works perfectly! Not many poems can flow and have a meaning and rhyme at the same time but you did very well. You did a great job with making each word have a true meaning. Thanks for sharing and keep writing!! Great job!