Why?

 

Hating it,

Choking on this confusion running around

 I am bound to you in secrets.

Can't you see,  

That you seem to bring me down?

This world wont hold my head up Anymore.

All that I've,

Created dissolves me to the ground.  

I am no more in this empty child. 

Breathe it in

and try to frown I cannot see.

I cannot collect every dream you own,

Making you so faded and alone.

I pray to thee,

I hope that he wont let me down.

I pray to thee,

That he wont fall down. 

Every word I say just has no sound.

Vibrations are the only way to be found.

I sit and scream why?

Why must every story end so cold? 

Why does every one rely on what they're told?

This is not complaining.

This is just maintaining.

I don't know, maybe I'm just digging my Own hole.

Can you count on me?  

I have giving up every thing I have to hold. 

I altered my self to fit inside your mold. 

I bled out, all the poison that I chose, 

And I gave back every heart I ever stole.

Moving now, I find the words,  

I take in every note that I have heard. 

I can't find peace in this dripping wound. 

I can not feel it, it only burns the girl.

Hiding in the dark,  

I cry and scream why? 

Why must every story end so cold? 

Why do people rely on what they're told?

This is not complaining.

This is just maintaining,

I don't know.

Maybe I'm just digging my own hole.

Maybe I belong in someone else's world.

Reviews

[Arec]

The frustration and a sense of defeat is clearly portrayed over and over. It gives one sense of hopelessnes that makes ones heart ache.

Very interesting poem though I must say I do not so much care fot the structure. It makes it harder to read.