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Pain.

Pain.

A Poem by sav

When I was little
I used to hate feeling pain.
I would cry
When I got a paper cut.
I hated getting hurt.
But now,
After many years of being used,
I realized - 
Pain feels great.
The feeling of a blade
Slicing through your arm
A screaming headache
It's all the same.
It's life.
Life is pain.

© 2022 sav


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As a reader, I cringe at the idea of "cutting". However, your words have informed the reader of your story and, done in a way that we can "feel" the pain. On the other hand, life is not that kind of pain. Best to you and, keep writing. Temp

Posted 2 Years Ago



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Added on June 6, 2022
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