Girl In Pieces

Girl In Pieces

A Poem by sav
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This poem is based on the book called Girl In Pieces by Kathleen Glasgow

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Blood seeps out of her cuts.
A shiny puddle of deep red
Covers the floor.
Her eyes
Full of nothing.
Her face
Shows a sad smile
A tear 
Sliding down her cheek
Her whole body is cold
Not even the warmth of a fire
Can save her now.
Her chest falls
One.
Last.
Time.
She finally cut away the bad.
Completely.

© 2022 sav


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I think it is quite well written
I noticed a new drug for depression has been quite successful
Hopefully it can put a large dent into this sort of situation

Posted 2 Years Ago


Liked the spare, brief, evocative wording. Self mutilation is an illness. Some, as here, take it too far.

Posted 2 Years Ago



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Added on May 24, 2022
Last Updated on May 24, 2022
Tags: sadness, depression, fear

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i'm 14 years old. i love writing poetry. i recently lost most of my old poems. i'm just trying to remember my old life. more..

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