The Game of Love

The Game of Love

A Poem by savesthedaynj

 He asks for your

advice before he

f***s his next

victim. A girl

much like your former

self but not

as pretty around the

mouth.

 

He paces now

back and forth

hoping you

notice he wants

you back.

 

So

he

taps

his

fingers

on

the

table

waiting

for

an

eye

roll.

 

But it never came.

© 2009 savesthedaynj


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I like it! My favorite lines...
"but not
as pretty around the
mouth."
and
"waiting for an eye roll"


Posted 12 Years Ago


Sounds like you pinned him to the cork, like some kind of horny beetle specimen.

I like this poem it feels honest and I feel like I can relate, I guess I've been on the other end of that conversation before.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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