Collide.

A car crash in few words.

Through windshields
and crushed glass,
he had never seen such beauty
until it crashed into his car.

Reviews

[Shellie]

this was intense - four lines and you manage to creat such endless possibility. Im reckoning The landscape was what killed him, thats what came through the glass. Unreal piece! well done.

[qaralynn]

oeh nice write!

[SpokenWord]

A deer stuck in headlights, that he crashed into the very thing he viewed as beautiful. I can't help but wonder if he was looking at a woman before he crashed. Good little write here.

[guiltyascharged]

Ah, somewhat true...

[c.m.]

Hmmmm....so short, but clear and beautiful. Another clear example that the length of the poem does not make the quality. Nice piece here.