Dark Desires

Dark Desires

A Poem by savdbylove
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Written just because I had tons of words in my head. I had help from a good friend of mine, and I'll pass on any remarks that I get from you to him :)

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Across the room I see you

And I know you see me too

That smile plays upon your lips

As you watch me seductively move my hips

I look again and you're not there

Then I feel your breath upon my hair

There's no one else but you and I

And I breathe out the softest sigh

You're slowly turning me around

I feel my feet leave the ground

Your gentle touch across my arm

A soft caress, full of charm

A feeling of warmth within my heart

A forbidden love we can't impart

You reach for my hand

And together we stand

Glancing into each other's eyes

Wondering where our love lies

With only the sound of our hearts beating

We both know this is not something fleeting

© 2008 savdbylove


Author's Note

savdbylove
anything and everything goes. i want input, reviews, etc.

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Good flow.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Wow, this is really amazing, it flows brilliantly hun, and is really beautiful, you have an amazing talant for rythming words.

Keep Writing hun, and i will keep coming back.
Dawn

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Still 5'2", my kids are growing up a lil (12 and 10 now). Out of practice on writing, and that degree I was working on has been put on hold yet again. Other than that, I'm still the same old me. An.. more..

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A Poem by savdbylove