Invisible

Invisible

A Poem by savdbylove
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Expression of pain and invisibility

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Walk on by

Don't say a word

This balance will upset

I'll leave you like a bird

 

Don't push me too far

I don't want to cross that line

My mind is not that stable

It's gone from time to time

 

There's scars from cuts

Expressing my internal pain

There's depression...

I'm going again

 

Keep on walking

Pass me by

I'm invisible to you

But I'll never wonder why

© 2008 savdbylove


Author's Note

savdbylove
Anything and everything goes

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Good write.
You can really feel for the character and their emotions.
Nice rhyme too.


Posted 16 Years Ago


Well written. Good rhyming. Heart felt and descriptive.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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savdbylove
savdbylove

Crawfordsville, IN



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Still 5'2", my kids are growing up a lil (12 and 10 now). Out of practice on writing, and that degree I was working on has been put on hold yet again. Other than that, I'm still the same old me. An.. more..

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