Nature Poem

I love nature

As Autumn leaves fall beneath the trees

Changing color in the warm summer breeze

I stand alone to the light house

Knowing I will never go to the white house

In the distance I hear birds sing

A beautiful song that makes my ears ring

The sound of water dripping from the rainfall

Probably running down the basement wall

Out here in the wilderness is where I belong

Being outside makes my summers seem long

These are my favorite months in the year

And it makes for a good vacation you hear?

Reviews

[MoonWisdom]

It struck my ears as a little choppy; the rhymes at the end work, but I would like more music in the rest of the lines. Thanks for the opportunity to read. --MoonWisdom