The World Behind

Behind all closed doors,
there are some open spaces,
Behind all happy souls,
There are some sad traces.
Behind all eyes,
Is a story, it visually narrates.
Behind all worries and strifes,
There's a wierd, soothing solace.
Behind silence,
There's always a loud voice,
that whispers, percieves and waits.
Behind all Smiles,
Is a mysterious story, with words at stake.
Behind all lies,
There's truth, that knows no haste.
Behind this rapid life,
lively, yet lifeless life,
There still a life,
that knows patience, and
that it's never waste!

Behind us beings,
There's a something,
That takes us to our deepest within.
There's an energy,
An eternal someone,
Watching, gazing, beholding,
At what it has magnificently made,
And still makes,
Knowing, hoping, percieving
That it will eventually realise,
Life's always about good choices,
Good efforts, Good companions, Good thoughts and great tastes and better somethings!

Reviews

[Crowley]

I love the honesty and the hope here. and those last lines are so important to me, I try to live that daily if I can manage to get out of my own way that is. Loved this!

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

this is my type of poem to read i love it, so well done and freely written, i sometimes write like this but not as good as you my friend.
very well enjoyed and did lift my morning too.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

that last line sums up the better truth in this poem...as the poem reminds the reader that for everything, every emotion there is an opposite...
but the last line....yes, those "better somethings" they are what is most important about life...not wealth or possessions...not by a long shot.
this is so well expressed....a lift for my morning...thank you.
j.