Yet today is so precious,
A today...full of wonders
A today...that holds adventure,
A today....that holds joys,
A today ...that holds pains
A today...that holds many gains
A today....that may be in vain
A today...that makes us smile
On how beautifully mysterious
And mysteriously beautiful
It can be for a while.
Yet this today
Is such a gift
A gift, that bonds us between
What we were
And may be.
What helps make life precious is the way it can change so dramatically. Never be come cynical and think that life is predictable.
Your words reveal that sunshine, cool breezes, healing's and love can blossom overnight.
Thank you for your inspiring write.
Peace,
Richie b.
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Thankyou so much, for your honest review, Richieb 😊
I much appreciate it!
And true.. read moreThankyou so much, for your honest review, Richieb 😊
I much appreciate it!
And true..Life's dramatically unpredictable, and that's what makes it interesting *smiles*
Wonderful Saumya. :) Though this poem may seem on the surface as quite simple one but considering its depth this could be taught to small children in schools too.
Keep writing many more!
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Thankyou Anjali😊I'm glad the simplicity of this piece touched you.
I really like thIs. And what you wrote is so true, today is a gift, because you don't know what tomorrow will bring, and what happened yesterday is in the past and you can't change it. So the only you can change is the present, which is today, and how you chose to do so, is up to you. but what you chose to do today might affect the rest of your life.
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Thankyou so much, Sascha!😊
I'm glad you enjoyed reading the piece, and could relate. .. read moreThankyou so much, Sascha!😊
I'm glad you enjoyed reading the piece, and could relate.
Thankyou for sharing your thoughts about 'the preciousness of today's too😊
Hi all:)
this is me....Saumya
well, i don't have much to tell you all about me..
but yes to start with,
I love writing & painting.(you can find some of my paintings in the "my photos" section of.. more..