From A Puzzled Void Of Myself...

Sometimes I don't feel like doing and saying, or listening anything, but sitting idle is also something I don't get comfortable with. My mind wanders to places, that my heart is scared, and weepy to be in.Certain situations, and some people really can't be Forgotten , no matter  how cruel, immodest, stubborn, or ill mannered they have been to you....My mere self, haunts myself for the loss of losing the person, which actually is not a loss, but a decision taken by the person, despite knowing that he/she and the bond between us mattered (at-least for me) and despite that the other person left.  Time changes people, time changes circumstances, times makes us wiser and older in many ways, time makes us think, time makes us smile, time makes us laugh, but Alas! some people and the moments spent with them, that feeling of closeness doesn't fade away, even though they left us.. such long ago, really unaware of how bad it hurts to make our hearts understand, that it's futile hoping they'll ever come back, because the truth is, "they really will not" after-all, why would they ever leave, if they wished to come back? Why would they ever leave, if the person and the bond mattered? And yes, if the person really mattered, they wouldn't have been fooling around, blocking, unblocking, apologizing, and repeating those same things again and again. There comes a times when we get really fed up all such nonsense, and stop crossing mountains for such  people, because they clearly are not worth our sacrifices anymore. Why should we ever respect and feel sorry for losing somebody who never respected and pretended to be sweet, but was actually a devil with evil thoughts?They might try texting, calling etc. Jst to start those things again, but we really need to ignore boldly, because one can't be a prey to somebody forever! There really comes a time to grow up, and get out of this mess! Despite we kinda have deep emotions attached to that person...but....' And nothing is beyond "self-respect", not even some people's intimacy. Right?
 

Author's Note

Posting a sad prose for the first time
Note: most of the things mentioned in this piece are just imagination, whereas some parts are real.

Please read, rate, " Review" honestly, and let me know, if there's any correction required.( In my inbox)

Thank-you for stopping by, and reading this piece patiently :)

Reviews

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Well I think you had penned it down for me!
because I could not write it despite knowing this situation!

There are people who leave you and you feel helpless but strong with time.
and even if they text or mail you back sometimes.....you soo wish to mail/reply back but Its good that you dont because when you wanted them in your life they ignored you like just another girl and now when they want to get back......we must not.
Here, thing is just about self respect!
we aren't puppets though!

It connected :)
Be strong and bold! :) N Happiee!
There is a lottttttt to care for!
& ofcourse many many who are/will stay!

[Leslie Philibert]

Like this. You could make this even better by putting it into a more defined frame; it needs details..put it into a situation !

[Saumya]

Thanks for the kind review :)
Please Inbox me the ideas on how to make it more better, and also let my know what details can I add, to make it more alive.

Sincerely
Saumya

[KTizzle]

I definitely felt the sadness with you as I read. It was clear and explored some of the thoughts about letting go.

thanks for sharing!

[Saumya]

Thank you! :)

[wordman]

you did a great job showing those emotions

[Saumya]

Thank-you Ron :)

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Very well crafted piece! and you've managed to convey the message well. I think at times in our lives we experience that "come here go away' type of relatonship....where we realize the other is not as invested. Awesome job. Starz x

[Saumya]

Thank you so much! :)
I'm glad that you could relate, and liked this piece. :)

[Inject Positivity]

There is saying "good things and people walk away from our life to make way for the better things and people", but I really understand your message, I think in situations like that we become the only person working for the relationship or frndship whereas the other person hardly cared about it the way we did...

I felt your words deeply, I have went through many of this situation in my life, and I understand what you meant my frnd... Keep on smiling and moving forward, because action does bring result...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[Saumya]

Thank-you so much for such a thoughtful review, Dhiman :) I could completely relate to the thought you shared ,thnx.
Sometimes, we indeed need to s
smile and move on, bcz not everything and everyone is worth the wait.

-Saumya

[HeyJadeXO]

This is a nicely crafted piece. Alot of people suffer from these back and forth emotions.I really enjoyed this.Nice work

[Saumya]

Thank you. :)

[William Liston]

This reminds me of a girl at my school who stopped hanging out with me and my group of friends in 10th grade. Sometimes I wonder how she feels about us. For clarity's sake, I must say that we were never friends, but we were good associates ... I miss that the more I think about it.

Anyways, I thought this was a very relatable piece with as strong message. Anyone can put themselves in the narrator's situation because we've all had that "someone" who walked out on us and left (what seemed to be) a strong bond behind. Some of us have even been that person who walked out. It's a sad situation, but nevertheless, true.

- William Liston

[Saumya]

Well, dear William If you still remember your "good associate" and wonder why she left you all, and as you stated that you still miss her today, it clearly shows that she was your friend:) ACCept that, because our mind may forget, but the heart always remembers the special People, and misses them when they leave :)

Thank you so much for such a thing thoughtful review.I'm glad that you could relate so well with others this piece, and it reminded you of a person from your schooldays.

Thnx.
-Saumya :)

[bibin Sebastian]

GOOD , NICE EXPRESSION OF FEELINGS . I CAN FIND A POLITICS OF RELATION IN IT.GOOD ATTEMPT. MY SUGGESTION IS TO IMPROVE THE STORY LINE. NOBODY WANTED TO READ A WELL ARRANGED STREAM OF THOUGHT. I SUGGEST YOU TO WRITE A SMALL POEM CONVEYING THE SAME IDEA. THAT WILL ALSO BE WONDERFUL.

NICE ATTEMPT
GOOD LUCK

[Saumya]

It was my first attempt to write a "sad prose" and post it here, this piece was initially a poem, but I transformed it into a prose, with the mere intention of posting something new, from what you I've been posting before :)

Will surely write and post a new piece with the same theme soon...thnx :)

Please inbox me the corrections you feel is important.
Thank-you for stopping by, reading, and reviewing my write.

-Saumya

[barleygirl]

I love this message . . . it tells the story of my recent life. I've had many people turn their backs on me without explanation, & it was very hurtful for a long while, but finally I learned to celebrate the new space they created in my life to meet new awesome people like YOU Saumya! (((HUGS)))

[Saumya]

Thank you for the lovely review, Margie:) I never knew that posting a stuff here can be satisfying too.
Thank-you so much for the encouragement :)
I feel really blessed to have a lovely friend like you too😊

(((Hugs)))💛

[Valentine]

Honey for writing in a second language you are doing very well. There are some errors . Longer sentences than necessary, punctuation, capital where it doesn't need to be etc. But your thoughts are coming through loud and clear, that is the important thing. Valentine

[Saumya]

Thank-you so much for your kind words, Kathie :)
I've corrected the piece, please see and inbox me the corrections still required :)

Thanx again
-Saumya