Happy To Be Yours...

Just an imagination :)

Your eyes, 
makes me smile more, 
Your voice, 
has all cures, 
Your lips, 
 I crave, having more and more, 
Your hugs, 
alleys all feelings of being alone, 
I'm so happy...so glad....and so blessed 
To be yours.
 
I'm happy, happy to be yours. 

Minutes, Hours and Days passed. 
And so did the years,
oh how quickly they last. 
We fought, 
We laughed, 
We shared, 
And cared, 
We smiled, 
We giggled, 
We cried, 
And it all went through every year, 
In time and tides.
I knew you then, 
But i know you now, 
My frowns are replaced, 
By my blush now. 
I'm so happy....so glad...and so blessed 
To be yours.

I'm happy, happy to be yours. 


How could I not see this you, 
That I can see now, 
I was so blind, so unaware, 
and such a fool to not understand. 
Our fights made us wise, 
Our tears made us strong. 
And we were always there for each other, 
In all storms.
I always loved the way how 
You patched up. 
You wept more, when 
things were messed up. 
Your smile was something, 
That could heal my weeping soul, 
And your cuddles were something, 
That I relished most.. 
I'm glad that those arms are mine now, 
Mine forever, and mine for now. 
I'm so happy...so glad...and so blessed 
To be yours. 

I'm happy, happy to be yours. 

You've made me smile, 
In times I felt like crying, 
You saved my soul, 
When I was all alone.. 
You perceived me, 
When I was expressionless.
You've made me, 'me' 
When I had everything
Except, that faith in me . 
You induced courage, 
When I lacked that in me. 
You taught me everything i needed to know, 
And made my world, 
Beautiful than snow. 

You're a pure treasure, treasure to my soul, 
And I'd love to be imprisoned, 
Imprisoned in your heart and soul. 
Not just for this day, Not just for the coming days 
But for the years, that I can witness more.. 
I'm so glad, so happy...and so blessed 
To be yours. 

I'm happy, happy to be yours. 

Author's Note

Honest reviews please.. :)
All corrections are much welcomed( send the corrections reqired in my inbox/mails ,please don't post them here)

Reviews

[Addict With a Pen]

I love this poem so much because it just brightens my mood. I can feel such a love like this, with the words you used. It's such a cute love story, almost fairy tale.
My favorite lines are:
My frowns are replaced,
By my blush now.
I love the imagery and the vibes from this poem.
Amazing job!

[Saumya]

Thank you so much! :)

[AKSHAYAVATA GUPTA]

majestic...i hope these words are enough

[Saumya]

😇.....thank you :)

[cycy]

You're a pure treasure, treasure to my soul,
And I'd love to be imprisoned,
Imprisoned in your heart and soul.
Not just for this day, Not just for the coming days
But for the years, that I can witness more..
I'm so glad, so happy...and so blessed
To be yours.
lovely poem dear. beautiful ending there really enjoyed the read. xx

[Saumya]

Thank you :)

[Heromen Selena]

This such a sweet poem! I felt the love come through especially in the first stanza when you describe the body parts in that unique way. Later on in the poem you use some of the same words used in that first part, which to me is a little confusing, but I loved how you used words such as “crave” and “cure”. I also really liked how you always ended your stanzas with “I’m so happy…” it’s a nice constant item that keeps the rhythm going. I would suggest going back and rereading the poem out loud just to look for small unimportant mistakes like capitalization and spelling errors. I find that that method is the most effective for me to notice those smell errors. Great poem, keep up the good work! I'll send the corrections in your inbox after I post this.

[Saumya]

Wow! This is the most lovely review I could get :) thank you in tons! I'm more than glad you read, and enjoyed reading it :)

[Heromen Selena]

It was really good :)

[Leslie Philibert]

What I like here is the honesty of the emotions and the clarity of the content. Fine poem.

[Saumya]

Thank you :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!!
a "bare it all" write........
the passion and heartfelt emotions shines through........
innocent honest words.........
Stay happy forever.......God bless you.....

i really loved it!!!
:)

[Saumya]

Thank-you so much! :)

[Mary Christabel George]

A heartfelt poem..
Be blessed in love..
good write..

[Saumya]

Thanx...... :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

This was a very nice poem. The way you kept repeating the line I'm happy, happy to be yours. I like when poems do that, it makes them sound more poetic, and labels them as more of a poem, then just writing.
This was such a sweet, beautiful, romantic and emotion filled poem.
I really enjoyed reading it. :)

[Saumya]

Thank you so much dear :) I'm more than glad you liked the presentation and the entire piece :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Your welcome :)

[Riding the Rainbow]

Really touching piece. Weel done.

[Avinash]

Your writing is growing and so are you :) We are happy.

[Saumya]

Time changes everyone, we all grow, each day, each year,abd that's called "growing up", everyone grows up, and so have I :)

Thank you so much for the lovely review!:)

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful poetry for love.
"You're a pure treasure, treasure to my soul,
And I'd love to be imprisoned,
Imprisoned in your heart and soul. "
I liked the above lines a lot. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Saumya]

Thank-you so much Coyote :) it's always worth having my writes reviewed by you :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoy your work and you are welcome.

[Saumya]

........ :) :)