That Dream

I saw you today,
i saw you today,
i saw you today,
my Granny!
 
You looked lovely,
You looked cute,
You looked so sweet
my Granny!

we laughed,
we talked,
and enjoyed a lot
my Granny!

You  kissed my cheeks
i kissed your cheeks,
and i hugged you tight
my Granny!

we laughed for long,
and talked for long,
and everything around
was so calm...

I could feel the air,
I could feel smell the flowers,
and could  really feel
the essence
of your rhymes and stories!

you asked me about my well being,
and i always replied smiling,
and your smile 
was so soothing

The stars twinkled beautifully,
and the fireflies danced wonderfully,
and everything around
was so heavenly!

I slept in your lap,
before all turned fad,
and you kissed me on my head
and caressed me
my Granny!

you smiled at me
and i felt your smile,
although my eyes were closed
completely..

I felt like a kid
who was with a fairly,
who knew and
loved her truly!
and made her feel heavenly..

I forgot for those moments,
that you don't exist actually,
but that what i dreamt
proves me wrong completely.

although you aren't alive
but you still dwell in me
my Granny!
Dream is the place
which still keeps us together
my dear Granny!

I loved you that day,
I love you today,
and will love you forever
my Granny!

And may the dream
i saw that day,
be one of those
i often see...

Author's Note

my granny has been a very special person in my life. It was years back i lost her, and saw her in my dream one day.

i hope you all enjoy reading this write, and please feel free to give your views.
all your critiques, comments and appreciation are much welcomed.

regards
saumya

Reviews

[00000000000000000000000..]

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww so sweet:))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

[WILDERNESS]

thats a beautiful poem that must have made her smile...........

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A most empathic piece that reads well, good job.

[New Theory]

A comforting dream :) . Loved ones will always stay by you.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i am sure she is looking down reading this, and smiling.

[Dayran]

An experience that defies time and space ... in a wonder of the human mind. Nice ...

[Khushi]

I am sure many people can relate to this. A very well written poem.

[Zahra]

a sweet dedication. Very nice

[Sami Khalil]

A wonderful dream that recurs about nanny in a wonderful poem...:).............

[Utkarsh Singh]

saumya u never lost her infact god removes each and every barrier that can come between u and her
now she is even more close to u .....u can talk to her any time any where ...... btw gud one .....