Friend

a piece for one and all those great being, who make our lives worth...

Light, that ends

dark's existence,

Snow, that adorns

the mountains,

The cool breeze

that imparts calmness,

hopefulness and patience,

Music, that  heals 

heart's ailments,

Joy, that deters

pain's commencement,

and everything magnificent,

which is beyond definition,

is an incredible creature,

called....Friend

The one, who's 

ever ready

to heal all your pains,

The one, who can

tolerate you

in any condition,

The one, who 

perceives you

in all situations,

and A treasure, completely different

from any other possessions..

The one, who's the happiest,

and celebrates more than you,

on your success and achievements,

The one, whom you can ask and tell for anything 

any moment,

The one, who always 

relishes your presence,

and  is equally sad, 

in your destruction

The one who is sometimes,

more caring then parents,

The one, whom you can 

disturb any moment,

and merrily enjoys it

every now and and then..

The one who helps you,

in all conditions,

the one who's always fond of you

no matter how horrible or great

you have been to them,

And the one who makes your heart

cry loudly...'here lies the best person'

Such is an incredible treasure,

called...Friend

An indispensable element 

of one's life,

like salt, in brine solution,

body, without legs and hands,

sunlight, without sun

and life, without enthusiasm..

Author's Note

i hope you all enjoyed the write:)
please review it too:)
regards
saumya

Reviews

[Tam Warink]

Friends... they make us happy, they make us sad. Life seeks balance, always and change is the only constant. Everything has its limits; everything can "break." Even friends. Beyond life, who knows? Perhaps the rules change then. Perhaps.

100 constant changes

[Saumya]

yes Tam i absolutely agree with u:) but till the time we have friends with us, life seems really good:)
thank you so much for the review:)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for the beautiful and hopeful poem. We do need good friends to keep us balance and happy. Key to life. We must return the gift of friendship. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[prodicallife]

Dear Saumya,

You must have imagined a lot for inking that about a friend.

Great work!!

A friend is one who can pull out real you from your inside.

Stay blessed
Prodical

[Rose of many colours]

It is a beautiful portrait of friendship in fine words.Very well announced. I appreciate the tone of voice. Bless

[Lexi Villanueva]

100 This reminds me of my ex best friend Davonte.

[CBH]

This poem makes me want to grab all of my friends and stay with them together. The first stanza was my favorite, how friendship was compared to a beautiful mountain. The imagery is incredible, and breath-taking. Truly marvelous. You should definitely do more poems like this, with imagery, and lovely comparisons. This is definitely my favorite poem by you...so far;)

[Rita L. Sev]

A joyous poem, filled with light... Very nicely penned, Saumya!

[PoetryPenPal]

It was a good write my friend! :-)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A happy piece really, that releases the inner liking in all of us, well done.

[Michael (Letters and Li..]

Brilliant write! Your ideas and emotions flow so well. Very powerful poem!

[Moniba]

Lovely :') I agree with LadyAnne.

[Saumya]

thank you so much Moniba:) glad you enjoyed this write:)