Friend

a piece for one and all those great being, who make our lives worth...

Light, that ends

dark's existence,

Snow, that adorns

the mountains,

The cool breeze

that imparts calmness,

hopefulness and patience,

Music, that  heals 

heart's ailments,

Joy, that deters

pain's commencement,

and everything magnificent,

which is beyond definition,

is an incredible creature,

called....Friend

The one, who's 

ever ready

to heal all your pains,

The one, who can

tolerate you

in any condition,

The one, who 

perceives you

in all situations,

and A treasure, completely different

from any other possessions..

The one, who's the happiest,

and celebrates more than you,

on your success and achievements,

The one, whom you can ask and tell for anything 

any moment,

The one, who always 

relishes your presence,

and  is equally sad, 

in your destruction

The one who is sometimes,

more caring then parents,

The one, whom you can 

disturb any moment,

and merrily enjoys it

every now and and then..

The one who helps you,

in all conditions,

the one who's always fond of you

no matter how horrible or great

you have been to them,

And the one who makes your heart

cry loudly...'here lies the best person'

Such is an incredible treasure,

called...Friend

An indispensable element 

of one's life,

like salt, in brine solution,

body, without legs and hands,

sunlight, without sun

and life, without enthusiasm..

Author's Note

i hope you all enjoyed the write:)
please review it too:)
regards
saumya

Reviews

[Tam Warink]

Friends... they make us happy, they make us sad. Life seeks balance, always and change is the only constant. Everything has its limits; everything can "break." Even friends. Beyond life, who knows? Perhaps the rules change then. Perhaps.

100 constant changes

[Saumya]

yes Tam i absolutely agree with u:) but till the time we have friends with us, life seems really good:)
thank you so much for the review:)

[.Em.]

I definitely enjoyed this piece. I can relate. You explained my friends perfectly hahaha. This is a beautiful poem. The metaphors are beautiful and spot on. A great read to lift the spirits. I feel like it would be great as a spoken word piece :) if you decide to let me know. Thanks for posting.

[Edmund S. Obumba]

Beautiful description..another amazing piece from you

[Gobinder Singh Dhindsa]

Wow.. Nice writing. Keep writing. If possible then Do u read my writing Anguish?

[uzair zahid]

Its true.. But it is difficult to find such a friend these days..

[topsyturvy]

Friends are awesome, but a true friend is worth more than anything I can imagine. They're family.

[Karen]

I too agree with Tam, that friends do make us happy and sad, and if it weren't for the relationship, we probably wouldn't tolerate each other. But when true friendship is formed, there is a bond as the one you are writing about in this poem, and that is a beautiful existence between two people. Beautiful like your poem.

[junaid altaf]

this is simply so full of truth
its fragrance flows through the piece
exceptional....

[Ency Bearis]

That's what friends are for. You indicated it well with your write and poetized.

[Akshita]

a beautiful defination of frnd can b viewed in dis...
1 of d lovely piece i hav ever read....

[❤ Maggie ❤..]

Awww :) I love this. It makes me realize how truly thankful I am for my best friend. :) She has always been there for me, even when I wasn't, for her. Great write. :) I know many people will really be touched by this and realize the true meaning of friendship. :)

[Saumya]

thank you so much Maggie:) very glad you enjoyed the write, and much happy that you could relate:) many best wishes for you and your friends:)

[❤ Maggie ❤]

Thanks so much! And you are most welcome anytime (: