Friend

a piece for one and all those great being, who make our lives worth...

Light, that ends

dark's existence,

Snow, that adorns

the mountains,

The cool breeze

that imparts calmness,

hopefulness and patience,

Music, that  heals 

heart's ailments,

Joy, that deters

pain's commencement,

and everything magnificent,

which is beyond definition,

is an incredible creature,

called....Friend

The one, who's 

ever ready

to heal all your pains,

The one, who can

tolerate you

in any condition,

The one, who 

perceives you

in all situations,

and A treasure, completely different

from any other possessions..

The one, who's the happiest,

and celebrates more than you,

on your success and achievements,

The one, whom you can ask and tell for anything 

any moment,

The one, who always 

relishes your presence,

and  is equally sad, 

in your destruction

The one who is sometimes,

more caring then parents,

The one, whom you can 

disturb any moment,

and merrily enjoys it

every now and and then..

The one who helps you,

in all conditions,

the one who's always fond of you

no matter how horrible or great

you have been to them,

And the one who makes your heart

cry loudly...'here lies the best person'

Such is an incredible treasure,

called...Friend

An indispensable element 

of one's life,

like salt, in brine solution,

body, without legs and hands,

sunlight, without sun

and life, without enthusiasm..

Author's Note

i hope you all enjoyed the write:)
please review it too:)
regards
saumya

Reviews

[Tam Warink]

Friends... they make us happy, they make us sad. Life seeks balance, always and change is the only constant. Everything has its limits; everything can "break." Even friends. Beyond life, who knows? Perhaps the rules change then. Perhaps.

100 constant changes

[Saumya]

yes Tam i absolutely agree with u:) but till the time we have friends with us, life seems really good:)
thank you so much for the review:)

[Ayesha Atif]

I would really want that to be in a story form.
I really like one thing about your writing; versatility.
Your writing is not bound to a ground.

My heartily advice would be for you to never discontinue writing.
I would hate seeing a writer like you losing the expression quality.

Thank God for the gift he has blessed you with.
Keep exercising your talent.

[Saumya]

thank you so so very much Ayesha, wonderful to know that from you:)
its really a great feeling to be appreciated from anyone for a work, you never thought was that good:) i'll never stop writing, and the reason for it had and always will be people like you who keep inspiring and encouraging me from time to time:)
apart from being skilled, hope and inspiration are two mandatory things require in the long run, and u supplied me with it today:)
its really people like you, make make small and simple writers like me great:)

and i am and always will be thankful for this gift to me from God:)

a big thanks again:)
regards
saumya

[Ayesha Atif]

Thank you for the compliment. But your effort advances us to read good stuff. GO ON!

[Saumya]

youre very welcome always my friend:)
and sure, i will proceed gladly with it:)

cheers!

[Tina Louise UK]

Wonderful friendship tribute...beautifully done :) x

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Saumya... a beautiful poem
about friendship. truly... Pat

[New Theory]

Nice poem, wonderfully written, indeed friends are undeniably the most important things in our life.
Loved your poem.

Only two things I could find was "more caring then parent" it should be than.
there is a repetation of and (minor mistake. Happens with me all the time.)

But undeniably a sweet and beautiful poem.

[Ally Monique]

This is such a cute poem :) I love all my friends, and try to show them how much they mean to me every time I get the chance^^ Sure, friends can be frustrating, annoying, and not always give you the best advice, but at the end of the day we still love them :)
Thanks for the lovely poem!

[Aethereal]

But no one can be more of a friend to you than you can be of yourself. Those who have friends make all the more friends through induction. People ask of others: Why is she so much a friend to herself. We my require from others no more than we require from ourselves. Friends never make up for what we lack. Friendly bees are attracted to the beautiful flower who lacks nothing.

[Penny]

It feels like you have written this poem with a free mind and without taking extra pains in establishing a complex rhyming scheme and structure. Very nice write.

[Antonio Hernandez]

I think I've picked up on something that may be a bit off the beaten path. This entire poem seems to be one big, elaborate metaphor to explore the complexities of what makes a friend so essential in life. And, just by the language itself, I feel like this friend doesn't even have to be a person, which, if is the case, would be a brilliant use of personification, metaphor, and colorful imagery.

[Great Aunt Astri]

A well thought out poem which flows smoothly off the tongue

[BlackRose]

Great friends are hard to come by. When you have one or few or some like this, never take them for granted. Ones like this can last s lifetime. :o) Terrific piece.