Friend

a piece for one and all those great being, who make our lives worth...

Light, that ends

dark's existence,

Snow, that adorns

the mountains,

The cool breeze

that imparts calmness,

hopefulness and patience,

Music, that  heals 

heart's ailments,

Joy, that deters

pain's commencement,

and everything magnificent,

which is beyond definition,

is an incredible creature,

called....Friend

The one, who's 

ever ready

to heal all your pains,

The one, who can

tolerate you

in any condition,

The one, who 

perceives you

in all situations,

and A treasure, completely different

from any other possessions..

The one, who's the happiest,

and celebrates more than you,

on your success and achievements,

The one, whom you can ask and tell for anything 

any moment,

The one, who always 

relishes your presence,

and  is equally sad, 

in your destruction

The one who is sometimes,

more caring then parents,

The one, whom you can 

disturb any moment,

and merrily enjoys it

every now and and then..

The one who helps you,

in all conditions,

the one who's always fond of you

no matter how horrible or great

you have been to them,

And the one who makes your heart

cry loudly...'here lies the best person'

Such is an incredible treasure,

called...Friend

An indispensable element 

of one's life,

like salt, in brine solution,

body, without legs and hands,

sunlight, without sun

and life, without enthusiasm..

Author's Note

i hope you all enjoyed the write:)
please review it too:)
regards
saumya

Reviews

[Tam Warink]

Friends... they make us happy, they make us sad. Life seeks balance, always and change is the only constant. Everything has its limits; everything can "break." Even friends. Beyond life, who knows? Perhaps the rules change then. Perhaps.

100 constant changes

[Saumya]

yes Tam i absolutely agree with u:) but till the time we have friends with us, life seems really good:)
thank you so much for the review:)

[Ty]

"...indispensable element of one's life..." Great lines. Resonates.

[Saumya]

Thankyou..Ty😊

[Anjali]

Very beautiful and touching dedication to FRIENDS. I could relate to every sentence you described about FRIENDS.
I would like to bring to your notice few glitches in the eyes of the critic:

"The one who is sometimes,
more caring then parents,"

It shouldn't be THEN PARENTS BUT;

"The one who is sometimes,
more caring than parents,"

And a small typo:

"The one, whom you can
disturb any moment,
and merrily enjoys it
every now and and then.."

The word AND gets repeated.

[zaisham9393]

I am not very sure people like these exist anymore, and I dont agree, especially these words don't resonate with me.
''The one who is sometimes,
more caring then parents''
Thank you for the read request :)!

[Saumya]

They do exist, but they are rare😊
Thanx for sharing your thoughts, Zaisha😊

[zaisham9393]

Okay! Now I am jealous :D

[Saumya]

Haha...Every dog has a day, Zaisa 😊😉😉

[zaisham9393]

not me but ...:D

[Saumya]

Y not? We never know what tomorrow brings for us! Let's be hopeful, Zaisha😊

[zaisham9393]

Yeah, I aspire to be a positive person so thanks :D!

[Saumya]

😊 you're most welcome!

[zaisham9393]

I'm just kiddin...I am lucky to have people who love me and have been through hell for me so I am beyond blessed ! 😊

[Saumya]

Lol...And that proved that I was so right to think, that you've been telling me the opposite of what exactly is since then😀😉
Glad to know you've those 'precious friend/friends' in your life, Zaisha😊💕

[Mr.Writer]

Hey! Y'all have been kiddin without me... not fair haha :P

[Saumya]

Haha...yea,unfair maybe😜
But I guess you joined us too late😛

[zaisham9393]

Yup... and we were missing you Mr. :D ...not kiddin 😛...

[Mr.Writer]

Haha yeah, I joined late :D
But I'm rlly glad I was being missed :P

[Fifty and dying]

This poem you wrote about "Friend" I can only hope someday I get to meet and have a friend like this. They are a dime a dozen. In this cyber society we live in, it is hard to meet anyone who honestly cares.
I really enjoyed you use of words in this poem.

[Saumya]

Why to expect this kind of friends from the cyber world, when the one around us has so many good people in real😊 Cyber world is often not how we see, Sometimes what we least know bout the person is the real truth.

Thankyou for sharing your thoughts, I appreciate your visit here.😊

[Bear]

There are more life long friendships than marriages which should tell everyone the real value and importance of true friends. And what makes a friend a true friend? They are always there for you when you need them and you do the same for them without thinking about it. Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

[Saumya]

Indeed! A friend in need, is the best friend indeed😊
Thankyou for sharing your thoughtful words, Bear, and I'm so glad I got 5 Claps for this piece too *smiles*

One thing that I always first look for in your reviews, is the no. Of Claps they have at the end ,and it feels really wonderful to see those 5 at the end...May I always get those 5 Claps for all my pieces, my friend 😇😊
Thankyou so much! I muchly appreciate your visits *smiles*

[barleygirl]

This is beautifully creative the way you weave together realistic aspects of friendship with flowing metaphors from nature. It comes together well & conveys the enthusiasm that, to me, is the best part of a good friend. You are always filled with enthusiasm for each little thing that's shared between friends & for this reason you deserve every bit of that joyfulness right back atcha! *smile* (((HUGS))) You are a friend that makes people feel the way you describe in your poem, but I can also see that this was not written with any trace of ego, as if you thought it was a description of yourself. Total modesty from you always. It's an irresistible combination & I'm proud to call you my friend (((HUGS)))

[Saumya]

*smiles* Thankyou in tons for such a positive an honest review to this piece😊I'm very glad that you like the enthusiasm and happiness in my writes, most people normally don't notice that😊

I'm proud and glad to have a lovely friend, like you too 😊and I am blessed to be your niece friend ❤💕
It is always a pleasure inspiring and being inspired by you...You're indeed a gem kind of person I'm so very fortunate to have here 😊😊💕

((((HUGS))))

[Carol Cashes]

"The one, who's the happiest,
and celebrates more than you,
on your success and achievements,"

These are the truest words in this piece - a true friend has your best and highest interests in their hearts always.

When this is used as the measuring stick, then "friends" are eliminated as false and real friends are known.

[Saumya]

I agree, these are the truest thing about a true/real friend I've personally witnessed 😊

"Actions never lie" and it it is strictly applicable to friendship and friends too.If they care, the'll show
But if they are fake/friends for certain motive, there actions will eventually let one know😊

I appreciate your visit, and the thorough read, it takes a real, thorough reader sometimes to observe the very true and practical lines of a piece, and you're one of those😊

Thankyou for sharing your thoughtful words, Carol😊

[CAPOLAVORO]

I really like the feel of it. It was such a nice write about a friend.
"An indispensable element
of one's life,
like salt, in brine solution,
body, without legs and hands,
sunlight, without sun
and life, without enthusiasm.."

How could I ever describe it more? Wonderful. :)

[Saumya]

Thankyou so much, dear😊
I'm very glad you liked the piece so much, your words indeed meant a lot to me *smiles*

[Mr.Writer]

A positive, graceful and sweet poem Saumya!!
Friends indeed do not leave our sides, they stick together :)
Well done, keep it up :)

[Saumya]

Thankyou so much, Shaan😊
Friends should rather, never leave our sides, no matter how harsh things get..That's what makes the bonding sweeter😊
Thankyou for sharing your thoughts, and sure! I'll keep writing😊

[Mr.Writer]

I agree, it'll strengthen the bond!
No problem Saumya :))

[Wajiha Nayeem]

wonderful it is..keep writingg.....

[Saumya]

Thankyou Wajiha!😊