Friend

a piece for one and all those great being, who make our lives worth...

Light, that ends

dark's existence,

Snow, that adorns

the mountains,

The cool breeze

that imparts calmness,

hopefulness and patience,

Music, that  heals 

heart's ailments,

Joy, that deters

pain's commencement,

and everything magnificent,

which is beyond definition,

is an incredible creature,

called....Friend

The one, who's 

ever ready

to heal all your pains,

The one, who can

tolerate you

in any condition,

The one, who 

perceives you

in all situations,

and A treasure, completely different

from any other possessions..

The one, who's the happiest,

and celebrates more than you,

on your success and achievements,

The one, whom you can ask and tell for anything 

any moment,

The one, who always 

relishes your presence,

and  is equally sad, 

in your destruction

The one who is sometimes,

more caring then parents,

The one, whom you can 

disturb any moment,

and merrily enjoys it

every now and and then..

The one who helps you,

in all conditions,

the one who's always fond of you

no matter how horrible or great

you have been to them,

And the one who makes your heart

cry loudly...'here lies the best person'

Such is an incredible treasure,

called...Friend

An indispensable element 

of one's life,

like salt, in brine solution,

body, without legs and hands,

sunlight, without sun

and life, without enthusiasm..

Author's Note

i hope you all enjoyed the write:)
please review it too:)
regards
saumya

Reviews

[Tam Warink]

Friends... they make us happy, they make us sad. Life seeks balance, always and change is the only constant. Everything has its limits; everything can "break." Even friends. Beyond life, who knows? Perhaps the rules change then. Perhaps.

100 constant changes

[Saumya]

yes Tam i absolutely agree with u:) but till the time we have friends with us, life seems really good:)
thank you so much for the review:)

[DogDrawler]

lol u actually requested me to read this a long time go and im finally looking at it

[Rahul]

friends are someone who make us feel good in life when things neva go the way we expect, however, it depends what kinda friends' u are blessed with... cos it neva takes much to replace friends with foes, and foes with someone who leave u so abondoned in life. quite a poetry u have come up with. nicely stuffed!

[Norbanus]

Hardly a poem, that's found upon the site,
Relays its message so strong and so bright
One thing we see, and we see it right now,
A massage as powered as God will allow.

I'll not go picking the nits in this rhyme
We'll seek better meter at some other time.
For now, my friend, let me compliment you
for the beautiful poems and stories you do.

Something is terribly wrong on the site
I gave you a 100 but did it not right.
Ads interrupted so I could not save.
All I can give you is this feeble wave.

Your tribute to friendship good as can be.
I'll try again, for this tribute from me.

[Saumya]

Thankyou so much, Norbanus!😊
I much appreciate your visit here and your review is truly precious.

[ROXANE DORSEY]

I had a best friend who passed away in the 90's on my middle child's birthday, Thanksgiving Day. I enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing.

[Joey Nizz]

Life without friends is nothing, they can be your second family and sometimes your first.
Even when they make us sad or upset, in the end they are always there for us.

Thank you for reminding us of the importance of friends :)

[Saumya]

So true, Joey!😊 That's what 'true friends' actually are.More than just a friend, and much like a family.

Thankyou for sharing your thoughtful words :)

[Joey Nizz]

Your welcome, Im glad that I have read this, thank you :)

[Paul Bell]

So true. Friends can be more important than family at times.

[Saumya]

Thankyou Paul 😊
Glad you could relate.

[andrew mitchell]

epic comes to mind, well done

[Saumya]

Thankyou Andrew 😊

[An owl on the moon]

So beautiful and lifting to the soul, your words convey the purest essence of a friend, one who makes the world come alive with light. The world comes with so much pain, so many shadows, and we need the light of friends like we need the sun and stars. May your life always be filled with dear ones near and far.

[Saumya]

Thankyou so much, Craig😊.Glad you enjoyed the read.

[HeyJadeXO]

What a treasure a true friend is.

[Saumya]

:) yeah.. Indeed!

[Caroline]

i love this. i have a friend who is like this

[Saumya]

Great!😊
Thankyou for sharing your thoughts.