An Adventurous Child...

'sometimes when we sit and remember our childhood memories, they teach us many minute but precious principles to deal with life...these are some of them i discovered:)

Since the time I was a child,

i loved to gaze at the stars in sky,

their glitter,their shine , their spark

and the light,

filled me with huge delight..

and i always wondered,

what  made them shine so bright?

Since the time I was a child,

i loved to see the butterflies

pink, white, green, blue,

and some with beautiful stripes..

and i always wondered,

what  made these creatures fly?

Since the time I was a child,

i loved to see the rainbow in  sky

i always waited for the heavy rains,

so that i could see it back again...

those seven colors

left me completely mesmerized,

and i always wondered,

what  imparted it,
such

immense beauty in the sky...

Since the time I was a child,

i loved seeing  birds

fly high in the sky..

and like all others

wished too,
to fly in the sky

and  always wondered,

why humans too, cannot

at least skid in the sky?...

Since the time I was a child,

i have been loving

every second of my life,

i try understanding and enjoying

everything around and nearby

and no matter how harsh is my life,

i live it like an Adventurous child

fighting with harshness,

 every moment in it i survive...

for if you live life as a child,

you'll never know 

what are worries and strife,

as they indeed aren't anything else,

but ' happiness in the form of pains disguised'

and as you walk on these stairs of life,

you'll somewhere clearly know,

that' you are the one who can create 

everything for you, by the only  attitude

you have towards life'

and that will tell you what's life...

 No matter people judge you today

to be wrong or right,

'always remember, that's never a full stop,

but only a comma of life'

live life like an Adventurous child

for a child never knows

what are worries,anger, rejection, and pain 

all they know,

is to sail through life

and dance merrily,

even in storms and heavy rains.. 

they never care,

what people say is wrong or right

they only do what they think is right...

and this is why

they are always filled with

 cheer and delight...

Author's Note

i hope you all enjoyed reading this..
please give your honest review and feel free to mention everything you want to with respect to this write:)
many thanks
saumya:)

Reviews

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chu..]

This is amazingly good. The repetition, the content and arrangement of your stanze. Indeed, if this world is like a child, we will bear no grudge, no malice, no struggling, no killing, no bad would be inherited in us, because is not a product of childhood. But you see, my very good friend, Saumya, its never like that, not always. The world has grown oid and full of evil. But doing the right at the right time no matter what stand against would always make us smile and once more we become like a child. An Advanturous Child. Thank you so much for this poem.

[Ruth]

We seldom remember that others DO have their own things going on in life...powerful nostalgic piece, and shows the fragility of life xx

[Saumya]

thank you poppy:)

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and hopeful poem. Would be a better world if we looked at the world with the eyes of a child. Great description led reader to good places and thoughts. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i still love all the things that i loved as a child...that has never changed...i guess i am just an older child now.

i really felt this poem.

[Saumya]

thank you soo much Jacob:)

[I Am Svetlana]

Wonderful! I used to watch the stars with my dad at night every now and again when he would take the dogs out. Either I would follow him outside or he would coax me out. We would bring the binoculars so we could see them better, along with a view of the stunning moon. I never used to watch butterflies, but yes to rainbows and birds flying overhead. I still look at birds when I see them, wishing I was able to be one of them and be airborne.

[Saumya]

o wow! :) lovely to know that . am very glad you enjoyed my write and could relate:)

[annabellee]

So true. Really loved the last stanza. I could totally relate to your poem. I also have done all these things as a child, and sometimes I do still.
Great write :)

[Saumya]

wow:) lovely to know that dear:) thank you soo much for the great review:)

[annabellee]

you're most welcome :)

[Bobbie Coelho]

I think this poem is beautifully written, full of innocence; the child like wonder comes across very well. They say a child can see the truth through the dark: this poem proves it. Well done.

[Saumya]

yes Bobbie i completely agree with your thoughts here:) thank you very much for your lovely words:) glad you loved this write of mine:)

[bobc]

S...two impressions for this poem...and actually many of your poems. First, is that they seem very wordy to me. I wonder if you can communicate the ideas you want using far fewer words. Takes practice but I'd encourage you to try.

Second, is on a more personal note. Your work always tries valiantly to be inspirational in some way. I wonder if you feel successful, i.e. inspiring, doing this? Because when I read your work, I find it curious that I get the feeling it's hiding much more than it's revealing.

Take care and regards...bobc