An Adventurous Child...

'sometimes when we sit and remember our childhood memories, they teach us many minute but precious principles to deal with life...these are some of them i discovered:)

Since the time I was a child,

i loved to gaze at the stars in sky,

their glitter,their shine , their spark

and the light,

filled me with huge delight..

and i always wondered,

what  made them shine so bright?

Since the time I was a child,

i loved to see the butterflies

pink, white, green, blue,

and some with beautiful stripes..

and i always wondered,

what  made these creatures fly?

Since the time I was a child,

i loved to see the rainbow in  sky

i always waited for the heavy rains,

so that i could see it back again...

those seven colors

left me completely mesmerized,

and i always wondered,

what  imparted it,
such

immense beauty in the sky...

Since the time I was a child,

i loved seeing  birds

fly high in the sky..

and like all others

wished too,
to fly in the sky

and  always wondered,

why humans too, cannot

at least skid in the sky?...

Since the time I was a child,

i have been loving

every second of my life,

i try understanding and enjoying

everything around and nearby

and no matter how harsh is my life,

i live it like an Adventurous child

fighting with harshness,

 every moment in it i survive...

for if you live life as a child,

you'll never know 

what are worries and strife,

as they indeed aren't anything else,

but ' happiness in the form of pains disguised'

and as you walk on these stairs of life,

you'll somewhere clearly know,

that' you are the one who can create 

everything for you, by the only  attitude

you have towards life'

and that will tell you what's life...

 No matter people judge you today

to be wrong or right,

'always remember, that's never a full stop,

but only a comma of life'

live life like an Adventurous child

for a child never knows

what are worries,anger, rejection, and pain 

all they know,

is to sail through life

and dance merrily,

even in storms and heavy rains.. 

they never care,

what people say is wrong or right

they only do what they think is right...

and this is why

they are always filled with

 cheer and delight...

Author's Note

i hope you all enjoyed reading this..
please give your honest review and feel free to mention everything you want to with respect to this write:)
many thanks
saumya:)

Reviews

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chu..]

This is amazingly good. The repetition, the content and arrangement of your stanze. Indeed, if this world is like a child, we will bear no grudge, no malice, no struggling, no killing, no bad would be inherited in us, because is not a product of childhood. But you see, my very good friend, Saumya, its never like that, not always. The world has grown oid and full of evil. But doing the right at the right time no matter what stand against would always make us smile and once more we become like a child. An Advanturous Child. Thank you so much for this poem.

[sudeshna]

beautifully written... u refreshed all my childhood memories thank you..
...

[Saumya]

thanx..n wonderful to know that:)

[Joyce S. Greene]

Loved your attitude, saumya! To see life through the eyes of a child is a true gift. Beautifully done!

[Saumya]

thank you so much Joyce:) glad you enjoyed this write:)

[Edmund S. Obumba]

Nature..so beautifully portrayed in this piece.Simple but piercing words..colourfully written.

[Saumya]

thank you:)

[carol burgess romance]

This is an awesome write filled with the ways of a child...it says so much and so very uplifting,

[Saumya]

thank you carol:) glad you enjoyed the write:)

[FlatLineBeauty]

This was lovely and I loved how positive it was. The things seen through a child's eyes are just so magical and innocent. xo Winter

[Saumya]

thank you soo much dear:) i completely agree with you :) glad u enjoyed the write:)

[Shellie]

This is very good - the positivity is an excellent theme and you continued it through as you made your piece. Very good work!

[Saumya]

thank you shellie:)

[kublakhan27]

This is an unbelievable piece...nostalgic, vibrant, innocent, optimistic, and so many other things that exude positivity. There are many amazing lines scattered through the piece, too many to cite here. Overall, it is as perfect a coming-of-age commentary as one is likely to find. Awesome :)

[Saumya]

thank you sooo much Kublakhan:) very glad u enjoyed this write:)

[kublakhan27]

My pleasure Saumya :)

[Michael G. Smith]

There is a lot of wisdom here in this poem.

[Neville]

There are certain lines contained within this work that stand out and
made me think, yeah with a little time and refinement here and there
you could be a fantastic writer. Regards, N

[❤ Maggie ❤..]

Aw, Samuya, this was adorable!(: I absolutely loved it!!!