An Adventurous Child...

'sometimes when we sit and remember our childhood memories, they teach us many minute but precious principles to deal with life...these are some of them i discovered:)

Since the time I was a child,

i loved to gaze at the stars in sky,

their glitter,their shine , their spark

and the light,

filled me with huge delight..

and i always wondered,

what  made them shine so bright?

Since the time I was a child,

i loved to see the butterflies

pink, white, green, blue,

and some with beautiful stripes..

and i always wondered,

what  made these creatures fly?

Since the time I was a child,

i loved to see the rainbow in  sky

i always waited for the heavy rains,

so that i could see it back again...

those seven colors

left me completely mesmerized,

and i always wondered,

what  imparted it,
such

immense beauty in the sky...

Since the time I was a child,

i loved seeing  birds

fly high in the sky..

and like all others

wished too,
to fly in the sky

and  always wondered,

why humans too, cannot

at least skid in the sky?...

Since the time I was a child,

i have been loving

every second of my life,

i try understanding and enjoying

everything around and nearby

and no matter how harsh is my life,

i live it like an Adventurous child

fighting with harshness,

 every moment in it i survive...

for if you live life as a child,

you'll never know 

what are worries and strife,

as they indeed aren't anything else,

but ' happiness in the form of pains disguised'

and as you walk on these stairs of life,

you'll somewhere clearly know,

that' you are the one who can create 

everything for you, by the only  attitude

you have towards life'

and that will tell you what's life...

 No matter people judge you today

to be wrong or right,

'always remember, that's never a full stop,

but only a comma of life'

live life like an Adventurous child

for a child never knows

what are worries,anger, rejection, and pain 

all they know,

is to sail through life

and dance merrily,

even in storms and heavy rains.. 

they never care,

what people say is wrong or right

they only do what they think is right...

and this is why

they are always filled with

 cheer and delight...

Author's Note

i hope you all enjoyed reading this..
please give your honest review and feel free to mention everything you want to with respect to this write:)
many thanks
saumya:)

Reviews

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chu..]

This is amazingly good. The repetition, the content and arrangement of your stanze. Indeed, if this world is like a child, we will bear no grudge, no malice, no struggling, no killing, no bad would be inherited in us, because is not a product of childhood. But you see, my very good friend, Saumya, its never like that, not always. The world has grown oid and full of evil. But doing the right at the right time no matter what stand against would always make us smile and once more we become like a child. An Advanturous Child. Thank you so much for this poem.

[Zahra]

Childhood is a wonderful time of life and the inner child always keeps us adventurous and exploring. Beautiful write.

[Saumya]

thank you:)

[Antonio Hernandez]

I don't know what any of the colors mean (except rainbow) but I do like the structure and the imagery. I also like how you use the images to describe abstract qualities of life (radiance, flight, beauty, etc.) and the fact that you use it to draw your audience in. The only thing I would say work on to is to give it a stronger ending.

[Saumya]

thank you so much:)
please suggest me anything about the endin stanza..
thanx again:)

[topsyturvy]

Ahhh wow, it was such a joy reading this. The flow was wonderful and as a whole I loved the message :)

[Saumya]

thank you:)

[Eddie Phillips]

That was a beautiful poem. It was light and made you understand its meaning.

[LunarSong]

That was really pretty, I enjoyed the flow, rhyme, and message. Definitely reminded me of myself a bit :)

[TL Boehm]

stars, rainbows, butterflies, there is joy in keeping that child like wonder when we contemplate the world. Well done.

[PoetryPenPal]

WOW! Now, I just want to recite this line,"always remember, that's never a full stop, but only a comma in life. Lovely and very memorable line. Thank you for this wonderful and lively poem.

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

This is a good message and I also like looking at the beauty of nature and such, but I don't really agree with children not knowing worries, anger, rejection or pain. Indeed they experience these things just like any other human being, they just don't know exactly what causes these feelings or why they feel that way and they need help identifying those feelings. It is true that children have a playful nature and seem to be filled with cheer and delight at times, but it also depends on their home life. I think some children may not even know what happiness feels like. Anyway, I am just blabbering lol it is just how I feel, you shared your feelings well though and I did understand what you were trying to get across. It is nice seeing things through a child's eyes since they usually have a simple nature about them and they are easily amazed about things that adults easily pass by.

Good Job

[Saumya]

thank youu my friend for portraying your thouhts:) i respect it :) children not knowing worries, anger, rejection or pain. Indeed they experience these things just like any other human being,
but there's a difference, i.e an adult finds sophisticated and technical ways to overcome it,and is most of the times unsuccessful, but a child focuses on his powerful weapon, innocence, and that and that consequently gives them the courage to overcome life's problem in their own way, without even knowing clearly about that emotion, but simply with the hope and aim to face it and indeed they are successful as they believe in themselves:)
and this was what i tried to state here:)
thanx again for the review:)

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

You're Welcome

[Hatchling]

I like this! Keep up the great work

[Saumya]

thank you dear:)

[ayosonolowo]

Nice and beautiful one, i really like it.

[Saumya]

thank you:)