An Adventurous Child...

'sometimes when we sit and remember our childhood memories, they teach us many minute but precious principles to deal with life...these are some of them i discovered:)

Since the time I was a child,

i loved to gaze at the stars in sky,

their glitter,their shine , their spark

and the light,

filled me with huge delight..

and i always wondered,

what  made them shine so bright?

Since the time I was a child,

i loved to see the butterflies

pink, white, green, blue,

and some with beautiful stripes..

and i always wondered,

what  made these creatures fly?

Since the time I was a child,

i loved to see the rainbow in  sky

i always waited for the heavy rains,

so that i could see it back again...

those seven colors

left me completely mesmerized,

and i always wondered,

what  imparted it,
such

immense beauty in the sky...

Since the time I was a child,

i loved seeing  birds

fly high in the sky..

and like all others

wished too,
to fly in the sky

and  always wondered,

why humans too, cannot

at least skid in the sky?...

Since the time I was a child,

i have been loving

every second of my life,

i try understanding and enjoying

everything around and nearby

and no matter how harsh is my life,

i live it like an Adventurous child

fighting with harshness,

 every moment in it i survive...

for if you live life as a child,

you'll never know 

what are worries and strife,

as they indeed aren't anything else,

but ' happiness in the form of pains disguised'

and as you walk on these stairs of life,

you'll somewhere clearly know,

that' you are the one who can create 

everything for you, by the only  attitude

you have towards life'

and that will tell you what's life...

 No matter people judge you today

to be wrong or right,

'always remember, that's never a full stop,

but only a comma of life'

live life like an Adventurous child

for a child never knows

what are worries,anger, rejection, and pain 

all they know,

is to sail through life

and dance merrily,

even in storms and heavy rains.. 

they never care,

what people say is wrong or right

they only do what they think is right...

and this is why

they are always filled with

 cheer and delight...

Author's Note

i hope you all enjoyed reading this..
please give your honest review and feel free to mention everything you want to with respect to this write:)
many thanks
saumya:)

Reviews

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chu..]

This is amazingly good. The repetition, the content and arrangement of your stanze. Indeed, if this world is like a child, we will bear no grudge, no malice, no struggling, no killing, no bad would be inherited in us, because is not a product of childhood. But you see, my very good friend, Saumya, its never like that, not always. The world has grown oid and full of evil. But doing the right at the right time no matter what stand against would always make us smile and once more we become like a child. An Advanturous Child. Thank you so much for this poem.

[R Smith]

a beautiful remembrance of childhood, i find these days that my most memorable moments happened then, somehow they just stand out above the more mundane happenings of adulthood, its what i got from your work thank you Saumya :)

[Saumya]

you're most welcome Richard:) m glad that u could relate:)

[Surya pradha]

a simple and nostalgic poem with good moral. keep up the good work!

[Saumya]

thank you Surya:)

[MomzillaNC]

I like the little touches of color and your imagery.

NOTES: I don't believe strict meter is required for poetry. However, I do think a piece, especially one with rhyming schemes, needs a balanced meter. I struggled to find that balance when I read this aloud.

Also, I recommend revisiting spelling, grammar, and capitalization

[misha]

Ah, how i love nostalgic pieces. Great job! It had me remembering my childhood =)

[Saumya]

thank you:)

[periwinkle]

What a cute poem! Brings me back to my childhood memories

[Saumya]

thank you:)

[Pryde Foltz]

Adventurous child
for a child never knows
what are worries,anger, rejection, and pain
all they know,
is to sail through life
and dance merrily,
even in storms and heavy rains..

Great work, Saumya. The coloured font really adds a playful dimension.

[Saumya]

thank you Pryde:)

[Hitchhiker]

Eh . . . If you live life as a child you will never be anything but a child, and child-like. Why would you want to live like that? I read the poem, and I know you answered my question in your way of thinking, but still . . .

[Saumya]

reread it , you'll get to know :D
thank you:)

[Me]

Very deep and heartfelt writing here

[Saumya]

thank you:)

[Troy Henson]

Never remove the inner child i say. Let us always look at the world in as beautiful way as possible.

Very nice

Regards
Troy

[Saumya]

thank you:)