Reminiscense

Reminiscense

A Poem by Saumya
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just a simple poem on memories which play a major role in our life, they fill life with colors....

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Reminiscence,  or
simply remembrance, is
that precious box
that holds all our memories
of past and present...

Someone very dear,
and close to us
who now, no more
exists in present,
is so sweetly alive in us
in reminiscence...

A situation which once
proved us best,
and also the one
which proved us worst
can clearly be re imagined
through reminiscence...

A time when we were winners,
and also the time
when we were losers
what made us win,
and what led us lose,
is all brilliantly embedded 
in our Reminiscence..

How strong and surprising
is its presence,
that it forms the clear picture of our
past and present memories,
exactly the same
as it once happened...

People come, meet and go
but they leave the reminiscence...
Situations come, treat, teach and go
but they leave the reminiscence....

Everyhing that happens,
leaves its essence,
in a wonderful form,
called..
 Reminiscence.....

Such a marvelous miracle
 is this remembrance,
which is always with us
in all conditions
and enriching life,
with its sweet and sour essence,
with time's slow and steady advent..

© 2013 Saumya


Author's Note

Saumya
i hope you all enjoyed reading it:)
please tell me if you have any suggestions to make this piece much better...
all your suggestions are highly welcomed:)
please do rate and review..

many thanks
saumya:)

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Your message is clear & interesting, but as I mentioned in another recent review, everything is stated in general terms. This is why a reviewer such as "ginsy" (below) may make such an observation that everything seems redundant. I believe the reason for this is becuz every other poem sounds the same when all are written in general terms. As writers, we must reach deep for the specific details of knowable, touchable situations, & convey them in word pictures using all the senses . . . these are the ways we make each message stand out, instead of just saying some general idea about life that's been said before too many times. Instead of saying "someone very dear and close to us" (ho-hum!) . . . SHOW ME what this person is/was to you! WHY DO WE CARE if this person is remembered or not? SHOW instead of telling . . . each little remembrance that lasts so much longer than the actual situations of life. Paint word pictures of the way he/she looked at you as if he/she wanted to . . . (fill in the blanks) . . . use unusual comparisons to things we can all relate to . . . don't just tell me there's a box of memories . . . SHOW ME what memories are in that box . . . is it the dried up corsage from your first prom? what's in there? what matters to you? I'm sorry for going on a rampage here, but it drives me crazy when a person who writes so well, as you do, & you clearly enjoy writing, but you're not injecting yourself & your essence & your specific observations about life into your messages. I want to kick you in the butt to wake up your senses & to shake loose the details of what makes a memorable moment memorable for YOU!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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beautiful lines...especially stanza 6. however this contest is for poems about nature! but thanks for submitting your poem anyway.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Saumya

10 Years Ago

thank you:)
What a beautiful why to sum everything together:

"Everything that happens,
leaves its essence,
in a wonderful form,
called..
Reminiscence....."

Posted 10 Years Ago


Saumya

10 Years Ago

Thanx Peter:)
M glad you enjoy the write:)
one of the cruelest things I know is when our memories are taken from us. this is a lovely poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Great poem Saumya, Reminiscene of a beautiful time I suppose, great choice of words and beautiful melody.

Good work, Keep improving :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Brilliant beautiful inspirating giving a new look 100

Posted 10 Years Ago


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CBH
Really pretty and intriguing. I like it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Nice! Keep up the good work!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like the flow on this good work

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dear Saumya,

Wwoowww!!! How beautifully you explained the remembrance!!

The only way to cherish moments with someone who is not around and is very much mandatory for us.

I much appreciate that beautiful writing of yours.

Keep writing great!!

Regards
Darkstole.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Saumya

10 Years Ago

thank you so very much Darksole:) very glad u enjoyed the write:)
Our literature on these areas refer to reminiscence in a way that leaves very little doubt as to its significance ... especially in relation to the Elephant image of Ganesha. Indeed reminiscence is special. Nice write.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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