When You Are a Beginner

all those thoughts which arise in our mind being a beginner...

When you are a beginner,

nothing around 

seems easier...

It feels like

this world is a big sphere

and we,

simply a tiny creature.

When you are a beginner,

you are filled with endless vigor...

that something

which is highest,

when compared to any

other level..

When you are a beginner,

everything around

seems like

a wonderful element,

of an interesting picture..

Everyone around,

like the best teacher,

and every situation,

deliberately trying

to teach something newer...

When you are a beginner,

you are completely

at a different level,

knowing nothing, but still

fighting with everything

difficult..

and hoping for something better...

But being a beginner

is interesting 

in its own sphere,

as here

we cant even wonder,

whether the next moment

would be sunshine,

or a huge thunder..

So whatever you are today,

a beginner or older,

you need to have hope in all spheres,

for life always teaches you

something newer..

and day by day

tries to make you better.

and then, we can never wonder,

what this once called a "beginner",

would turn out to be after some time,

or years...

Author's Note

i hope you all enjoyed reading it..
i'll be really glad to see your reviews and please rate it:)
many thanks
saumya:)

Reviews

[Mittens]

You have a very positive outcome for someone as a beginner; please don't ever lose that. A lot of people find beginning something to be a frightening experience or they're self conscious about it because they don't want to be seen as a beginner. A poem like this goes a long way to instilling the a bit of reinforcement that beginning should be view as a positive experience, that learning something should be fun and enlightening.

Thanks again for the read request; great work as usual, Saumya.

[Saumya]

thank you soo much Matt:) glad you enjoyed it:)

[Ankit Mahar]

This is an amizing poem saumya .Nice work .Keep it up .
This poem reminds me of myself as I am also a beginner .
But I will like to take out an error in the line
So whatever you are today .
A beginner or older .
In the place of older it will be elite or something like that .Older is not the correct word here .
:-) With warm regards Ankit Mahar .A beginner .

[Angel]

When it comes to writing, I think we will always be "beginners"...there is so much to learn, and every piece is a new adventure...

[Akshay Rawal]

Yes it is always felt nice and enthusiastic when you are a newbie.....I just remembered all those moments in my life when i was new to my surroundings''''Refreshing and energetic....Keep letting me know about your newer works

[Dreamer]

Nicely Done! I liked reading this piece.

[Saumya]

thanx dreamer:) glad you enjoyed:)

[Dreamer]

You're welcome!

[Riding the Rainbow]

Really good piece!
Well done!

[Saumya]

thank you kejara:)

[Riding the Rainbow]

you're welcome;)) when you have time, take a look at my pieces;)))

[Saumya]

yeah.. i surely will as soon as i can:)