When You Are a Beginner

all those thoughts which arise in our mind being a beginner...

When you are a beginner,

nothing around 

seems easier...

It feels like

this world is a big sphere

and we,

simply a tiny creature.

When you are a beginner,

you are filled with endless vigor...

that something

which is highest,

when compared to any

other level..

When you are a beginner,

everything around

seems like

a wonderful element,

of an interesting picture..

Everyone around,

like the best teacher,

and every situation,

deliberately trying

to teach something newer...

When you are a beginner,

you are completely

at a different level,

knowing nothing, but still

fighting with everything

difficult..

and hoping for something better...

But being a beginner

is interesting 

in its own sphere,

as here

we cant even wonder,

whether the next moment

would be sunshine,

or a huge thunder..

So whatever you are today,

a beginner or older,

you need to have hope in all spheres,

for life always teaches you

something newer..

and day by day

tries to make you better.

and then, we can never wonder,

what this once called a "beginner",

would turn out to be after some time,

or years...

Author's Note

i hope you all enjoyed reading it..
i'll be really glad to see your reviews and please rate it:)
many thanks
saumya:)

Reviews

[Mittens]

You have a very positive outcome for someone as a beginner; please don't ever lose that. A lot of people find beginning something to be a frightening experience or they're self conscious about it because they don't want to be seen as a beginner. A poem like this goes a long way to instilling the a bit of reinforcement that beginning should be view as a positive experience, that learning something should be fun and enlightening.

Thanks again for the read request; great work as usual, Saumya.

[Saumya]

thank you soo much Matt:) glad you enjoyed it:)

[Avinash]

Yes we are all and would always remain " beginners" as long as we ready to learn. A very illuminating piece.

[Pryde Foltz]

May we stay beginners our lives through. Great and inspirational write.

[MikeV]

To be a beginner is to be a master
Because a beginner has an open mind and does not go
by rules, instead they follow there heart
great write my friend! :)

[Jack...]

Everyone of us are beginners, each day brings something new to learn for those of us who feel they know it all, have yet to totally begin. Very nice my friend. Learn with each new experience as we all learn from you.

[kublakhan27]

I really like how you've captured all the various feelings that go through the mind of a beginner, that mix of excitement and nervousness when we set out to do something we've never done before...well-said and well-written :)

[Emerald Seas]

I think we're always new at something and as writers, we can feel like a beginner just through a new way of looking at something that puts a new spin on the topic we're dealing with. A thoughtful writing - well done!

[Sami Khalil]

You are right on the money. All wise and well spoken...Thank you for penning...:)

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

I love the depth of the message in here. Just work on the flow of thought in the division of stanzas and improve on word choice and you'll be doing just fine. Thanks for sharing this! :x

[Hatchling]

Amazing poem! Great work, keep it up

[It's Me, The Miracle]

A beginner can start anywhere and make an impact on everything...The poem gives a wonderful insight about being a beginner...Thanks for sharing it