You have a very positive outcome for someone as a beginner; please don't ever lose that. A lot of people find beginning something to be a frightening experience or they're self conscious about it because they don't want to be seen as a beginner. A poem like this goes a long way to instilling the a bit of reinforcement that beginning should be view as a positive experience, that learning something should be fun and enlightening.
Thanks again for the read request; great work as usual, Saumya.
Saumya, you have a wonderful way of bringing a smile to the heart. This is a fresh piece that reminds the beginners (in any pursuit) to hang in and plow ahead, and to savor the beginnings in life!
There seems a very innocence here as if I were looking through a child's eyes. I think on the second, third and fifth stanza you don't really need the "when you are a beginner" the mind implies as you read. Thry reading without them and see what you think.
Love you're title and this writing is extremely well written . Love how you rhyme your words and the way you inspired every writer/reader that has seen this. Me personally, this is like and advice to me and I thank you for sharing it
Keep writing! :)
there is much to this idea, simplicity as well as complexity.. we begin, grow either in age or in knowledge, hopefully both only to do it over again as you experience new things in life... one thing about youth, about beginnings, is the wonder and looking at things, at life itself and the impatience for things to change often is lacking as you grow older, get more responsibilities.... this is the complexities, but we must never lose that wonder and impatience for new things and to change the wrongs in life. otherwise we lose our humanity. too many zombies masquerading as human in the world today.... way too many.... we need a whole new world, a humanity of"beginners" lets go!!! ---redzone. ps, it's a good poem.
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When you are a beginner - you will have a whole world how to tell there is only one way to do it. Their way. :)
It's okay to be a beginner at things, but always use a little common sense and never mistake or let others believe your lack of knowledge in something is immaturity or naivety on your part.
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