When You Are a Beginner

all those thoughts which arise in our mind being a beginner...

When you are a beginner,

nothing around 

seems easier...

It feels like

this world is a big sphere

and we,

simply a tiny creature.

When you are a beginner,

you are filled with endless vigor...

that something

which is highest,

when compared to any

other level..

When you are a beginner,

everything around

seems like

a wonderful element,

of an interesting picture..

Everyone around,

like the best teacher,

and every situation,

deliberately trying

to teach something newer...

When you are a beginner,

you are completely

at a different level,

knowing nothing, but still

fighting with everything

difficult..

and hoping for something better...

But being a beginner

is interesting 

in its own sphere,

as here

we cant even wonder,

whether the next moment

would be sunshine,

or a huge thunder..

So whatever you are today,

a beginner or older,

you need to have hope in all spheres,

for life always teaches you

something newer..

and day by day

tries to make you better.

and then, we can never wonder,

what this once called a "beginner",

would turn out to be after some time,

or years...

Author's Note

i hope you all enjoyed reading it..
i'll be really glad to see your reviews and please rate it:)
many thanks
saumya:)

Reviews

[Mittens]

You have a very positive outcome for someone as a beginner; please don't ever lose that. A lot of people find beginning something to be a frightening experience or they're self conscious about it because they don't want to be seen as a beginner. A poem like this goes a long way to instilling the a bit of reinforcement that beginning should be view as a positive experience, that learning something should be fun and enlightening.

Thanks again for the read request; great work as usual, Saumya.

[Saumya]

thank you soo much Matt:) glad you enjoyed it:)

[Patrick O'Neil]

Very nice and inspirational. Like this line the most :
"knowing nothing, but still
fighting with everything
difficult..
and hoping for something better..."
Well done.

[Saumya]

thanks Peter for your lovely review:) glad you enjoyed this write:)

[Heather]

i love this! it is truthfully put and beautifully put especially the last stanza, great job!! :D

[Saumya]

thanx Heather:)

[Heather]

no problemo!! :D

[Glen Yumang Manese]

The theme and concept is there...you like these type of writings with the repeating lines...thanks for the invite...

[Kris]

Well, as they say, it's all about the journey, not the final stop. Loved the poem!

[ayosonolowo]

Wow this is indéed interesting, thank you

[Izzy-01]

this poem almost makes being a beginner look even more interesting than having a whole load of experience . truth is the fun is in learning and graduating from beginner . lovely poem : )

[Saumya]

yes dear, i agree with you:) glad you enjoyed this write:)

[mark]

great write :)
tells quite a story bout beginners and this will boost there confidence in things.
its hard being new at something sometimes but we all get through it.
i enjoyed reading this well done :)

[Archia]

Being a beginner can a good thing, but being an 'older' can be also. They both have their hopes. A lovely poem that expresses beginning. I really liked the last few lines and what those meant.

[L.Edward]

Beautiful sentiment. I love new beginnings. The possibility offered by new beginnings in and of themselves are a much cherished feeling, even before they bring anything to fruition. That space that opens up withi, at the end of a long spell of exhaustion and closure. To rest in that space is pure joy for me.

[icelandicblue]

There are times that I wish that I could be a beginner once again. There is a wonder there that cannot be duplicated. This is a marvelous poem.