You have a very positive outcome for someone as a beginner; please don't ever lose that. A lot of people find beginning something to be a frightening experience or they're self conscious about it because they don't want to be seen as a beginner. A poem like this goes a long way to instilling the a bit of reinforcement that beginning should be view as a positive experience, that learning something should be fun and enlightening.
Thanks again for the read request; great work as usual, Saumya.
Interesting insights Saumya, to be a 'beginner' does present problems, but also can be exciting because everything is new and each new thing brings that 'sphere' a little closer into view. Watch out for pronouns and plurals like this one.
"and we,
simply a tiny creature."
If you say 'we' then it is plural, and you would have to say "simply tiny creature(s)"
I finally can review again! My computer had some kind of virus, so part of my account was disabled. Your poem is lovely, and it really emphasizes the truth of just starting out. Great work!
You have a very positive outcome for someone as a beginner; please don't ever lose that. A lot of people find beginning something to be a frightening experience or they're self conscious about it because they don't want to be seen as a beginner. A poem like this goes a long way to instilling the a bit of reinforcement that beginning should be view as a positive experience, that learning something should be fun and enlightening.
Thanks again for the read request; great work as usual, Saumya.
Your faith certainly makes views like yours believable. I am much older, much more cynical about the value of my fellow man and his aspirations. Witness the fact that I have 48 read requests and hardly anybody ever visits my pages. It is harder to have much hope as we age because our capabilities diminish, our voices are ignored and we are swept aside as unimportant. Social Security reduces your income to a pittance, and venal politicians try to use our age group as an influence point. You can see hope shining from the faces of most young people; I suffer pangs of bittersweet feeling when I see them. I remember wanting to make a difference in the world, oh yes, I do. Now when I look back over the debris-strewn path I took, there are things like my daughter and family that I treasure, but also so much I regret, am repulsed by and bored by so much. It's life. It has a beginning, and if you are fortunate to take the right steps, find the right path, follow the right advice and listen to your own heart, you'll be ok. Sadly, the time when many of us finally understand those steps, we are too old to take them.
Hi all:)
this is me....Saumya
well, i don't have much to tell you all about me..
but yes to start with,
I love writing & painting.(you can find some of my paintings in the "my photos" section of.. more..