Life on this planet has evolved to fill every niche in Nature. Each human being fills some kind of niche somewhere because of that person’s unique abilities, and therein is found that person’s value. As a poet , each person discovers through trial and error the best form of poetry that they are proficient at, and that becomes their niche. You seem to be developing a unique personal style of poetry here.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
Wow! This is the most beautiful review I've got for this piece this get *smiles* thankyou so much! �.. read moreWow! This is the most beautiful review I've got for this piece this get *smiles* thankyou so much! 😊
I'm glad you admire my writing style😊
"stop stopping yourself," Best line - EVAR! We have a tendency to get in our own way and you have wisely, and kindly! pointed that out. Next time I want to scream and yell at a young person who's whining, I'll just hand them this...
There's a typo in the title. "youself" is not a word I've ever heard of.
It baffles me no one has mentioned that in any of the comments I looked at.
Anyway, it's got a good up lifting message. Should be very useful to anyone in a depressed state of mind.
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Oh yes! Even I am amazed to notice that now😮
Thankyou for pointing out the mistyped 'Yours.. read moreOh yes! Even I am amazed to notice that now😮
Thankyou for pointing out the mistyped 'Yourself'😊 ....I remember the time when I first posted it here, it was 'Yourself' intsed of 'Youself'' Maybe it was when I might have edited the poem later after posting, it mistakenly got converted into 'Youself'' .
I've finally changed it to yourself now :) sigh*
I'm glad you enjoyed reading the piece and liked it's message.I appreciate your first visit in my page!😊
"Stop, stopping yourself because of others and value you . "
The poem was great, the ending was worth stopping to grasps again and again!
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Thankyou so much, Nebraska!😊 I'm glad this piece inspired you a lot ..And I'm already smiling for.. read moreThankyou so much, Nebraska!😊 I'm glad this piece inspired you a lot ..And I'm already smiling for the fact that you've got the essence of this piece 😊
Having just come from the funeral of a young boy who was a shining example to his peers - a boy who was destined for great things - a leader, yet he took his own life, I can say the attitude in this might have made him see through the dark fog.
Excellent writing Saumya.
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 2 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
Thankyou so much for sharing your experience, Tony :)
It is often the good people, who are t.. read moreThankyou so much for sharing your experience, Tony :)
It is often the good people, who are the least fortunate! sigh*
*prayers for that dear young soul, may he rest in peace*
Our life..our spirit .. has enormous value! Celebrating diversity is a wonderful happenstance. Loved your write, with it's heartfelt meaningful poetic theme. A pleasure to read and soak up ... :-)
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Thankyou so much!😊 I'm glad you enjoyed reading the piece.
Hi all:)
this is me....Saumya
well, i don't have much to tell you all about me..
but yes to start with,
I love writing & painting.(you can find some of my paintings in the "my photos" section of.. more..