The Inner voice..

When we live each day of

our lives,

there's something always with us,

called,

our  INNER VOICE....

Every breath we take,

in each resolutions we make,

in every decisions we take,

in everything, real or fake,

Its always with us,

to keep us safe...

in me,

in you,

and in everyone

around you,

Its that something,

which is always true..

In anger,

in pain,

in frustration,

in worry,

or even in tension,

Its that something,

which gives us strength,

and helps us, to face it

friends....

In happiness,

in achievements,

in success,

or any such great conditions,

Its that something,

which encourages us,

to go ahead with them...

No matter, how wise,

or great one becomes,but 

Its that something,

which is alive in everyone,

till our last breath,

and life,s end.....

Helping us always,

in every situation....

so, hear it friends,

as much as you can,

trust it deeply,

as deep as you can,

for if you walk with it,

hand in hand,

then living this life,

no more remains

a big confusion...

as it will guide you,

the actual way, to be

with it in all situations....

and sway you away,

from life's all unsolvable equations...

 

Author's Note

i hope you all loved reading this...
please do review and rate it...
regards,
saumya

Reviews

[Akshat♥]

The use of brown color has a great impact on the poem :)
The picture is really nice :)
I completely agree with you :)
Our thoughts make our inner voice :)
Some has bad thoughts and some has good...
we all fight with it everyday :)
You showed us real path to walk through...
Saumya oyur writing skills are increasing day by day...
am glad about that :)
Keep writing dear!!

[Saumya]

thank you for the really great review....:) and its great to knw, that my writings improving..will work more on it... thank u once again:)

[Akshat♥]

you are welcome :)

[dw817]

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I think we all have an inner voice that tries to help us in our lives from time to time. It's merely a matter of taking the time to listen. :)

I like your 7th stanza. It's almost like it could be sung to a tune.

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

You write from such a bright spot in your heart.

[Phantom Heart]

I think your poem was good. I like that you wrote about the inner voice. Creative, wise and a thing to ponder. Thanks for writing.

[David Scott]

You have a conversation with the reader. This works here better than when you try to tell a story in this format. The casual and simple format gives me the feeling you are sincere and humble.
Can you understand how this style works better here than it does in the story about the puppies?
I got some great advice from another poet here. They told me to, "show it not say it".
Here you still "say it" more than you "show it", but the tone compensates well in my eye.
Very enjoyable read.
Scott.

[bobc]

I see that other reviewers like the change in colour and case...it's a matter of personal taste really. I find it simply distracts from the words. I became more interested in what you thought the voice actually was rather than what it does in your life...but that's probably just me. Thanx...bobc

[Dr. Wood ?]

very wise Saumya

I have a voice definitely

AND I always pay it heed

[Angel]

As Alice, lost in Wonderland, once said:
"I give myself such very good advice...
But I very seldom follow it.
That explains the trouble that I'm always in..."

Yes, if we would only listen to our hearts, instead of going off wlly nilly on after every foolish whim, we'd be sooo much better off!

[ba_mcfarlane]

Wonderful and light stuff about our inner self or better angel, or just plain conscience. Kudos!

[Dana Alsamsam]

often times an inner voice can definitely help to guide us with intuition! this was a great piece to tell people simply to follow their hearts.

i don't think you need to add color to your poem for it to have impact- you can do that with the words alone.

[Ency Bearis]

A notable poem with wishful thoughts, nice write.