The Inner voice..

When we live each day of

our lives,

there's something always with us,

called,

our  INNER VOICE....

Every breath we take,

in each resolutions we make,

in every decisions we take,

in everything, real or fake,

Its always with us,

to keep us safe...

in me,

in you,

and in everyone

around you,

Its that something,

which is always true..

In anger,

in pain,

in frustration,

in worry,

or even in tension,

Its that something,

which gives us strength,

and helps us, to face it

friends....

In happiness,

in achievements,

in success,

or any such great conditions,

Its that something,

which encourages us,

to go ahead with them...

No matter, how wise,

or great one becomes,but 

Its that something,

which is alive in everyone,

till our last breath,

and life,s end.....

Helping us always,

in every situation....

so, hear it friends,

as much as you can,

trust it deeply,

as deep as you can,

for if you walk with it,

hand in hand,

then living this life,

no more remains

a big confusion...

as it will guide you,

the actual way, to be

with it in all situations....

and sway you away,

from life's all unsolvable equations...

 

Author's Note

i hope you all loved reading this...
please do review and rate it...
regards,
saumya

Reviews

[Akshat♥]

The use of brown color has a great impact on the poem :)
The picture is really nice :)
I completely agree with you :)
Our thoughts make our inner voice :)
Some has bad thoughts and some has good...
we all fight with it everyday :)
You showed us real path to walk through...
Saumya oyur writing skills are increasing day by day...
am glad about that :)
Keep writing dear!!

[Saumya]

thank you for the really great review....:) and its great to knw, that my writings improving..will work more on it... thank u once again:)

[Akshat♥]

you are welcome :)

[CBH]

Color really affects me. It accented the piece very well, and highlighted the main ideas of the poem. It is very easy on the mind, and makes it easier to read for slower readers. I love it!📈

[Saumya]

Thankyou so much!😊

[MikeV]

My inner voice says, "beautiful write" :)

[Christine Jackson]

Very good. It's true that we each have an inner voice but some still have yet to acknowledge it. Yet others, are locked away for it. lol

[Anand Sehgal]

No matter, how wise,
or great one becomes,but
Its that something,
which is alive in everyone,
till our last breath,
and life,s end.....
true words. Loved the write.

[Ink Angel]

This is wonderful very deep and meaningful welldone.

[Great Aunt Astri]

You say it well. The inner voice is always wiser. When I was young I gave my inner voice a name -Margaret. She always knew what to do when there was a problem.

[Olivia]

lovely piece, the tone of the poem felt truly inspirational.

[TL Boehm]

as it will guide you,
the actual way, to be
with it in all situations....
and sway you away,
from life's all unsolvable equations...
wise words - we spend way to much time worrying about that which we cannot solve.

[Cassie]

I agree with you totally about the inner voice. Thank you for sharing

[Saumya]

thank you Cassie:)

[Rosaria_V]

Truly deep, I love it :) As I have loved everything you write!! So good :)

[Saumya]

thank youu soo much dear:)