The Inner voice..

When we live each day of

our lives,

there's something always with us,

called,

our  INNER VOICE....

Every breath we take,

in each resolutions we make,

in every decisions we take,

in everything, real or fake,

Its always with us,

to keep us safe...

in me,

in you,

and in everyone

around you,

Its that something,

which is always true..

In anger,

in pain,

in frustration,

in worry,

or even in tension,

Its that something,

which gives us strength,

and helps us, to face it

friends....

In happiness,

in achievements,

in success,

or any such great conditions,

Its that something,

which encourages us,

to go ahead with them...

No matter, how wise,

or great one becomes,but 

Its that something,

which is alive in everyone,

till our last breath,

and life,s end.....

Helping us always,

in every situation....

so, hear it friends,

as much as you can,

trust it deeply,

as deep as you can,

for if you walk with it,

hand in hand,

then living this life,

no more remains

a big confusion...

as it will guide you,

the actual way, to be

with it in all situations....

and sway you away,

from life's all unsolvable equations...

 

Author's Note

i hope you all loved reading this...
please do review and rate it...
regards,
saumya

Reviews

[Akshat♥]

The use of brown color has a great impact on the poem :)
The picture is really nice :)
I completely agree with you :)
Our thoughts make our inner voice :)
Some has bad thoughts and some has good...
we all fight with it everyday :)
You showed us real path to walk through...
Saumya oyur writing skills are increasing day by day...
am glad about that :)
Keep writing dear!!

[Saumya]

thank you for the really great review....:) and its great to knw, that my writings improving..will work more on it... thank u once again:)

[Akshat♥]

you are welcome :)

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'The Inner Voice'
Saumya,
I believe 'inner voice' to be our 'concious.' This inner knowing is part of our soul and connected with the Spirit of God. It meant as a signal to direct humanity. This world and every person living and dead has been influenced this way. We are creatures of choice and capable of learning from our choices. This poem of yours is a good reminder of our inner life voice.
Blessings,
Kathy

[Confuser]

Thought it was great and super inspiring - you made me think about that something that keeps me going. Great rhyming, you gave a lot in this poem, no matter how wise someone becomes, it that something inside: our intuition, our faith...thank more the writing. Loved it!

[Saumya]

thank you so much:)

[Confuser]

You are welcome.

[Peacegal]

I definitely loved reading this, thank you:)

[Me]

I just love this. So well written and just beautiful words flowing off of the page. Great job

[Saumya]

thank you:)

[SinnerInspired]

Awesome :D hope to read more of your poems

[Saumya]

thank you:) n sure thing, youre always welcome:)

[Shaun Payton]

sometimes we wish we listened to that inner voice a little more. I always wonder if its the voice of our soul

[B.J]

So true, I did enjoy reading your work

[PoetryPenPal]

Wow. That poem made me feel so warm inside. I really enjoyed it. Thank you.

[topsyturvy]

I tried reading it just the black lines with the starting stanza after the brown inner voice as title. Just the black lines, it was nice. Then I tried reading just the brown ones together, again inner voice a title. It's still about inner voice. It's amazing!

[Archia]

That was a lovely poem, and it had a wonderful meaning about the 'inner voice.' I must admit though, I wasn't sure I understood the point of the different colours, I just saw them as different colours and nothing more for the poem. Regardless of that, I still very much enjoyed this poem and thought it had a lovely meaning.