The Presence Of GOD...

this is a small poem for all, and specially the people, who have confusion, and questions, regarding God

When i was born,
and didn't knew life,
in any form,

you were the one,

to keep me calm,

and bless me with that eternal warmth..

When i took the first step to walk,

and didn't  actually knew,

how to walk,

you were with me,

in the form of

hope and courage,

in every step i walked....

When it was the first 

day of my school,

and i didn't knew,

what would i do,

you were the one,

to keep me,

cool....

When i was a student,

and was messed up with the problems,

regarding my education,

you were the one,

who listened to me,

with full attention,

and blessed me, with

optimism and patience....

Now, in this world,

i have many friends,

but dear God,

no one was, is, will,

and can ever be 

better than you,

till the end.....

so hats off to you,my dear friend,

and i applaud myself,

for having such a great friend....!

so now, when people question me,

about your existence,

dear God, my friend,

i simply say,

' if you have ever felt that 

lovely SMILE, on the face of

Children....

if you have ever felt that

lingering SMELL of , flowers 

in your garden.....

and felt the magic behind it,

dear men and women...

if you have ever felt that 

beauty and majesty,

in every object,

around your surrounding,

dear men and women....

if you have ever brought

a smile,

on a poor child's face,

or anyone, in need of

your help, and concern....

You have felt his existence,

and seen GOD then....!!

you go in the holy places,

and search him in those statues,

but trust me friends,

if you instantly want to meet him,

you simply need to close your eyes,

join your hands,

kneel down, bow your heads...

and remember him,

with love, and unshakable confidence,

and you will meet him then..!

for you will find him everywhere,

if you simply 

have that love, respect and devotion

for him dear friends..!

he's not in those statues,

and cant be met,

by lighting incense sticks, candles,

or any such practice...

he dwells in all of us,

in the form of our hopes,

and strengths,

my dear friends...!

resting peacefully in the 

bottom of your hearts,

every second...

watching and loving you all

every second...

And he has not taken any form 

of human,

or have been visible to us dear

men and women,

because,

he wants us,to

love and respect,

every human..

feel his existence in everyone...

and hence,

prove ourselves,

to be

his splendid children.....!

 

Author's Note

i hope you all really loved reading this...
i am heartily and genuinely sorry, if i have hurt any of my readers religious beliefs...
i simply wanted to help everyone know, that God actually exists...

thank you all for your time...
it would be great if you all read and review it...!!

regards,
saumya:)

Reviews

[Falcon1]

Special Communications here and there I feel his presents everywhere in the hearts of the children I meet on the streets of my home town struggling to get by with a pray and a smile so in return I give to them a note that says Jesus is here in my heart and tells me to say to you Jesus loves you and I do too.

[Saumya]

Thanking for sharing your beautiful insights on this poem, Falcoln.
I'm glad you liked it!😊

[emmajoy]

' .. so hats off to you,my dear friend, ~ and i applaud myself, ~ for having such a great friend....!'

In spite of all your wonderfully reverent words in this poem, it was those sweet, simple phrases that really reached into me. Since i was a little girl, have thought of God as a laughing friend, a friend who's not all pomp and ceremony.. as you say. And so, I truly do love the way you see and feel Him.

Like so many of your posts, this is beautifully sincere. Thank you.

[Saumya]

thank you soo very much dear....felt great to know, that you could clearly imbibe my thoughts in this poem...i could see that clearly in your review..:)
thanx once again:)

[Aethereal]

You seem to be as mystical a poet as I am. God seems to be defined by most people as a mindful agent who defines our Reality. I think that such a God would be a Great Mystery , one who would be outside of all Realities of Definition. I’ve always felt the presence of such, but I don’t know how that‘s possible, and that’s another mystery to me. It’s a good feeling in any case. God is mindful of me as the Source of my Definition.

[Saumya]

thank you my friend..:)

[Astro]

This is a beautiful way to express your love of God, and for those who believe in Him/Her this will be a delightful read. There is one small error in your grammar early in the poem. Your use of the verb "to know" shouldn't be written in the past tense of "knew" but as present tense, "know"
ie. "and didn't knew life,"
Overall, this is written very well and the reader can feel that you have a beautiful heart that wishes to share the wonderful feelings you get from your worship of God in a more pure way than a ceremonial or dogmatic way. Good job.

[Kristin Lee]

This is very sincere. It's refreshing to see such faith in a young writer. Writing about faith can be difficult because, as you pointed out, it can step on some people's toes. But if your message is from the heart it will reach the right the audience. Nice job.

[WILDERNESS]

The One and Only truth, you have found it .................. and beautifully narrated. Well done

[annie lee]

very sincere and joyful, as always. your faith is a beacon to all.

[Nia Hope]

This is really pretty and oh so positive. Great work :)

[Rita L. Sev]

Very sweet, Saumya - made me smile!

[SyberRose]

' if you have ever felt that
lovely SMILE, on the face of
Children....

this says it all...nicely done dear..hugs