The Presence Of GOD...

this is a small poem for all, and specially the people, who have confusion, and questions, regarding God

When i was born,
and didn't knew life,
in any form,

you were the one,

to keep me calm,

and bless me with that eternal warmth..

When i took the first step to walk,

and didn't  actually knew,

how to walk,

you were with me,

in the form of

hope and courage,

in every step i walked....

When it was the first 

day of my school,

and i didn't knew,

what would i do,

you were the one,

to keep me,

cool....

When i was a student,

and was messed up with the problems,

regarding my education,

you were the one,

who listened to me,

with full attention,

and blessed me, with

optimism and patience....

Now, in this world,

i have many friends,

but dear God,

no one was, is, will,

and can ever be 

better than you,

till the end.....

so hats off to you,my dear friend,

and i applaud myself,

for having such a great friend....!

so now, when people question me,

about your existence,

dear God, my friend,

i simply say,

' if you have ever felt that 

lovely SMILE, on the face of

Children....

if you have ever felt that

lingering SMELL of , flowers 

in your garden.....

and felt the magic behind it,

dear men and women...

if you have ever felt that 

beauty and majesty,

in every object,

around your surrounding,

dear men and women....

if you have ever brought

a smile,

on a poor child's face,

or anyone, in need of

your help, and concern....

You have felt his existence,

and seen GOD then....!!

you go in the holy places,

and search him in those statues,

but trust me friends,

if you instantly want to meet him,

you simply need to close your eyes,

join your hands,

kneel down, bow your heads...

and remember him,

with love, and unshakable confidence,

and you will meet him then..!

for you will find him everywhere,

if you simply 

have that love, respect and devotion

for him dear friends..!

he's not in those statues,

and cant be met,

by lighting incense sticks, candles,

or any such practice...

he dwells in all of us,

in the form of our hopes,

and strengths,

my dear friends...!

resting peacefully in the 

bottom of your hearts,

every second...

watching and loving you all

every second...

And he has not taken any form 

of human,

or have been visible to us dear

men and women,

because,

he wants us,to

love and respect,

every human..

feel his existence in everyone...

and hence,

prove ourselves,

to be

his splendid children.....!

 

Author's Note

i hope you all really loved reading this...
i am heartily and genuinely sorry, if i have hurt any of my readers religious beliefs...
i simply wanted to help everyone know, that God actually exists...

thank you all for your time...
it would be great if you all read and review it...!!

regards,
saumya:)

Reviews

[Falcon1]

Special Communications here and there I feel his presents everywhere in the hearts of the children I meet on the streets of my home town struggling to get by with a pray and a smile so in return I give to them a note that says Jesus is here in my heart and tells me to say to you Jesus loves you and I do too.

[Saumya]

Thanking for sharing your beautiful insights on this poem, Falcoln.
I'm glad you liked it!😊

[ba_mcfarlane]

This strikes me as a declaration of faith as much as poetry, well done

[quinfinn]

i enjoyed the write. you have some clever and innocent concepts about who we are and where our spirituality originates...as you know, i am pagan, i don't subscribe to the bible as truth ...nor do i think that Jesus Christ (though i believe he was a real person) was the son of god....when man tries to attain divinity by proxy i have to reject the idea wholesale as man's vanity...i do believe there is something much greater than man and quite possibly even an afterlife, but i dont subscribe to organized religion and never will.....excellent write, Saumya

[Saumya]

thank you soo much:)

[Angel]

I did, indeed, love reading this. As I have found, there are a few folks in this site who are not so friendly toward those who post religious poetry, but fortunately, they are few and far between. Even those who dont necessarily agree with you will be considerate and respect your right to your beliefs.
This is a grand piece. I enjoyed it very much.
In your beginning stanzas, did you mean to type "know", in the present tense?

As a Christian, I believe that God manifested Himself in the flesh. I believe that Jesus Christ is God. However, if you do not, that is fine. Just wanted to warn you before you read any of my Christian stuff.

;-D

[Ency Bearis]

A remarkable insightful poem, nicely written.

[Saumya]

thank you:)

[Leslie Philibert]

Like the poem, but as a agnostic I am not convinced there is a God...but too long to discuss here ! -
like the poem, as I said.

[sanya]

this has touched my heart. whatever u wanted to express u have expressed and very clearly toooo !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Dr. Wood ?]

once again I applaud your faith and you display it with LOVE in this poem....Your God will always be there for you....

[Saumya]

thank you soo much:)

[smilempsn]

Thatz not 'small' at all Saumya ;) :P
I think you went in with the urge to write and write and write... That made this piece a mammoth :)

[Akshat♥]

God is always with you in any form :)
I can totally relate to your piece :)
The use of colors gives a nice effect to the poem ..
wonderfully written!!
Keep writing and sharing!!

[Saumya]

God is with everyone, always..all we need is to actually love and trust him...nd the moment we do that... we can feel the change:)
thank you soo very much for the great review:)

[Prritiy]

I loved this, and absolutely agree with you, no need to search for him in statues, roasaries, but just love all and he is there :)
hugs to you.

[Saumya]

thank you dear:) great that you could relate...
a grand hug to you too:)

[Prritiy]

you are welcome :)

[Prritiy]

and
thanks for the Grand Hug :)

[Saumya]

hahaha:) no problem dear..!!!:)

[Prritiy]

.............. :)