The Presence Of GOD...

this is a small poem for all, and specially the people, who have confusion, and questions, regarding God

When i was born,
and didn't knew life,
in any form,

you were the one,

to keep me calm,

and bless me with that eternal warmth..

When i took the first step to walk,

and didn't  actually knew,

how to walk,

you were with me,

in the form of

hope and courage,

in every step i walked....

When it was the first 

day of my school,

and i didn't knew,

what would i do,

you were the one,

to keep me,

cool....

When i was a student,

and was messed up with the problems,

regarding my education,

you were the one,

who listened to me,

with full attention,

and blessed me, with

optimism and patience....

Now, in this world,

i have many friends,

but dear God,

no one was, is, will,

and can ever be 

better than you,

till the end.....

so hats off to you,my dear friend,

and i applaud myself,

for having such a great friend....!

so now, when people question me,

about your existence,

dear God, my friend,

i simply say,

' if you have ever felt that 

lovely SMILE, on the face of

Children....

if you have ever felt that

lingering SMELL of , flowers 

in your garden.....

and felt the magic behind it,

dear men and women...

if you have ever felt that 

beauty and majesty,

in every object,

around your surrounding,

dear men and women....

if you have ever brought

a smile,

on a poor child's face,

or anyone, in need of

your help, and concern....

You have felt his existence,

and seen GOD then....!!

you go in the holy places,

and search him in those statues,

but trust me friends,

if you instantly want to meet him,

you simply need to close your eyes,

join your hands,

kneel down, bow your heads...

and remember him,

with love, and unshakable confidence,

and you will meet him then..!

for you will find him everywhere,

if you simply 

have that love, respect and devotion

for him dear friends..!

he's not in those statues,

and cant be met,

by lighting incense sticks, candles,

or any such practice...

he dwells in all of us,

in the form of our hopes,

and strengths,

my dear friends...!

resting peacefully in the 

bottom of your hearts,

every second...

watching and loving you all

every second...

And he has not taken any form 

of human,

or have been visible to us dear

men and women,

because,

he wants us,to

love and respect,

every human..

feel his existence in everyone...

and hence,

prove ourselves,

to be

his splendid children.....!

 

Author's Note

i hope you all really loved reading this...
i am heartily and genuinely sorry, if i have hurt any of my readers religious beliefs...
i simply wanted to help everyone know, that God actually exists...

thank you all for your time...
it would be great if you all read and review it...!!

regards,
saumya:)

Reviews

[Falcon1]

Special Communications here and there I feel his presents everywhere in the hearts of the children I meet on the streets of my home town struggling to get by with a pray and a smile so in return I give to them a note that says Jesus is here in my heart and tells me to say to you Jesus loves you and I do too.

[Saumya]

Thanking for sharing your beautiful insights on this poem, Falcoln.
I'm glad you liked it!😊

[CreativeCookie]

I absolutely love this poem! It shows our God in a wonderful light! Thank you so much for sharing it with me!
Love,
CreativeCookie

[dw817]

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Sometimes - God is a good friend, because He (She ?) is a good listener. No Being will remain as quiet or still as you relate your questions, comments, or concerns. Well, a Teddy Bear might, but occasionally they need the needle & thread to keep them in shape. :)

Glad you have found your peace ...

[uzair zahid]

This is a beautifull write.... I liked it very much.... It potrays a very true concept..

[Everett DeValle]

Such beautiful devotion here...Yes, you can feel God...and prayers do work.:)

A really nice poem, Saumya.

[Lisa Victoria]

Beautiful poem...very inspirational and uplifting....one note your use of knew should be know, other than that I really enjoyed this piece:)

Lisa

[Catrina De Maria]

Wow! A truly amazing, inspirational piece of work! Your faith in God really showed when I read this poem. As a Christian myself, I love the fact that you too can feel God's prescence in the flowers, and on the smiles of children. That is one reason I don't go to Church, as I think you can find God in the fields and the rivers and as you wonderfully put, 'beauty and majesty, in every object of your surrounding'. Again, a truly beautiful poem!
God Bless xxx :)

[misha]

This is such a nice poem that shows how great God is. The only thing that would need a little fix is the word "Knew" that you used often in the poem and the actual word should be "Know. For example, "When I was born and didn't knew life." This should actually be "When I was born and didn't know life." Other than that, you did a great job.

[Katho28]

a very inspiring and insightful poem... well done :) really enjoyed... hope and faith really shines through in this poem.

[Lee Foreman]

This was BEAUTIFUL!! This is great for people on the spiritual journey to get closer to God. I am personally on that journey to be closer to Him. And this just offered more inspiration for me. I enjoyed reading!!