The Presence Of GOD...

this is a small poem for all, and specially the people, who have confusion, and questions, regarding God

When i was born,
and didn't knew life,
in any form,

you were the one,

to keep me calm,

and bless me with that eternal warmth..

When i took the first step to walk,

and didn't  actually knew,

how to walk,

you were with me,

in the form of

hope and courage,

in every step i walked....

When it was the first 

day of my school,

and i didn't knew,

what would i do,

you were the one,

to keep me,

cool....

When i was a student,

and was messed up with the problems,

regarding my education,

you were the one,

who listened to me,

with full attention,

and blessed me, with

optimism and patience....

Now, in this world,

i have many friends,

but dear God,

no one was, is, will,

and can ever be 

better than you,

till the end.....

so hats off to you,my dear friend,

and i applaud myself,

for having such a great friend....!

so now, when people question me,

about your existence,

dear God, my friend,

i simply say,

' if you have ever felt that 

lovely SMILE, on the face of

Children....

if you have ever felt that

lingering SMELL of , flowers 

in your garden.....

and felt the magic behind it,

dear men and women...

if you have ever felt that 

beauty and majesty,

in every object,

around your surrounding,

dear men and women....

if you have ever brought

a smile,

on a poor child's face,

or anyone, in need of

your help, and concern....

You have felt his existence,

and seen GOD then....!!

you go in the holy places,

and search him in those statues,

but trust me friends,

if you instantly want to meet him,

you simply need to close your eyes,

join your hands,

kneel down, bow your heads...

and remember him,

with love, and unshakable confidence,

and you will meet him then..!

for you will find him everywhere,

if you simply 

have that love, respect and devotion

for him dear friends..!

he's not in those statues,

and cant be met,

by lighting incense sticks, candles,

or any such practice...

he dwells in all of us,

in the form of our hopes,

and strengths,

my dear friends...!

resting peacefully in the 

bottom of your hearts,

every second...

watching and loving you all

every second...

And he has not taken any form 

of human,

or have been visible to us dear

men and women,

because,

he wants us,to

love and respect,

every human..

feel his existence in everyone...

and hence,

prove ourselves,

to be

his splendid children.....!

 

Author's Note

i hope you all really loved reading this...
i am heartily and genuinely sorry, if i have hurt any of my readers religious beliefs...
i simply wanted to help everyone know, that God actually exists...

thank you all for your time...
it would be great if you all read and review it...!!

regards,
saumya:)

Reviews

[Falcon1]

Special Communications here and there I feel his presents everywhere in the hearts of the children I meet on the streets of my home town struggling to get by with a pray and a smile so in return I give to them a note that says Jesus is here in my heart and tells me to say to you Jesus loves you and I do too.

[Saumya]

Thanking for sharing your beautiful insights on this poem, Falcoln.
I'm glad you liked it!😊

[Eric Pudalov]

This is an absolutely stunning write, Saumya!! And it seems we may have some in common between our faiths, surprisingly.

I've felt for a very long time that, as you say, "if you have ever brought
a smile, on a poor child's face, or anyone, in need of your help, and concern...." that that is truly the way to experience God.

Your poem has definitely brought a smile to my face.

[Saumya]

Thank you Eric:)

[Claire in VA]

Beautiful write full of truth.

[LunarSong]

Wow, I loved you sharing times when you've felt his existence. Really pretty poem. I think He most certainly is the best friend you can have. :) I just have one note, I think it would flow better if you changed the word knew in the first few stanzas to know.

[CBH]

I'm a strong Catholic, so I see a lot of truth in this poem. It shows the world that your only true friend is Him, and that you have to give Him all of your faith. He is always there for you, and you need to recognize that. Nicely done!

[VALORMORE DE PLUME]

Your heart shines bright like a mirror,
Reflecting God's love back on us, Dear.
Inside you, God's grace surely does flow,
I thank you Saumya,for letting it show.

[poetdoug]

"I applaud myself for having a friend like this"
I love the way you worded this, for I feel exactly the same as you.
Thanks for for doing such a creative job of honoring our best friend---Father God
Excellent my friend

[TL Boehm]

this is why I wanted my own kids to grow up knowing God and having a foundation because when I was growing up - I did not know Him. there is so much we face in this world - doubt should not be one of those things with which we need to struggle - a great poem Saumya

[Dayran]

An incredible portrayal of a life with God by the blessings we receive in our birth. The statues? ... oh ... don't worry about those ... they are only for those who have lost their contact and are trying to regain it again. Nice write.

[Rosaria_V]

All I can say is beautiful, I loved this :)

[The dark story]

it's a beautiful meaningful write written with true devotion. love and reverence. i loved the way you have penned it and outlined your words of wisdom . thanks for sharing.