Parents, you know, are the first, and the best angels, we get in our life......
They do everything for us, but in turn,want nothing, except the love and care, they always have been giving..
So, here are the thoughts, which i today, want to share with you all, on our parent's hearts behalf....
They give us birth, but never say, that its because of them, that we are on this earth..!
They give us life, but never say, that its because of them,that we are alive...!
Our mother feeds us, with the first milk, which you already know, is so essential, for the child's good health, but she never says,that its because of it, that you aren't ill...!
They firmly hold our fingers, and teach us to walk, but they never say, that its because of them, that we today, can properly walk..!
They are our first teachers, but they never say, that without their assistance, we would be big losers....!
They teach us, how to earn our living, but never say, that without their help, we could be nothing...!
They are always with us, like a protective shield, preventing us from the harshness, this world yields... but never say, that without their protection, we could be completely lonely....!
When you get hurt, they feel the pain, more than you, but still encourage you, that it will soon be rescued, without even saying, that they feel it more than you....!
They do so much for you, more than what, they can actually do, because, my friends, they really love you.....!
But sadly, at some phases, we do such things, that we actually, shouldn't do...
They care for you, love you , and this is why, they are concerned for you.... But this at times, becomes, a source of irritation, and disgust, for the children, who are so called... 'Grown up', till then....!
The love, care, and concern, that they once gave, and hoped for, goes in vain..... the gown up child, now called, 'A man'.. sees them as a big burden.... and feels, that life could be much better, without their existence.....!
So, friends, let me remind you, at this instance, that, you too were, at some phase of life.... Children...! completely helpless, crying deeply and bitterly, for the love, warmth, and concern... which was later, only given to you, by your parents.....!
so why, in their old age, when they have turned emotionally and mentally into children, you can't understand them..? can't love them..? and deprive them, of that love and concern, which should actually be given to them...?
and most essentially, what is it, which makes you hate them then.....? is it their Love, Care, Warmth and Concern.....!!
But still, they don't won't hate you, my dear friends, because, you never know, but they were, and always be your best friends, who are with you from the beginning, till the end...!
So, my dear readers and friend, i humbly urge you, please, please, please, never ever hurt, these lovely angels again... and if you already have, please ask them, to forgive you then.... and you will be pardoned....!
and if you don't, forget it, that you will afford heaven.....!
for God never forgives the people, who hate their parents....!
i hope this one will definitely touch the strings of your heart, and i really hpoe that you really loved reading this....!!
please review and rate it..!!
regards,
saumya
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I think about on the bad I've done for my parents and still undeniably and indubitably I still end up doing it out of their spite. It's one to know when to stop and stare and be just a good son but I find myself having a hard time to accept it. Sad but a truly lovely piece for sure. :)
A little utopian I think.. depends on what kind of parents you had.. we got yelled at quite often "I brought you into this world and I can take you out of it" Just thought you should know not all parents are roses.. some are the thorns..
Otherwise.. nice poem
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
I guess every parent has that quality of saying it some time or other time 'I brought you into this .. read moreI guess every parent has that quality of saying it some time or other time 'I brought you into this world' :) :)
But certainly they do many scarifies just for us :)
A little long, but really did touch my heart, parents, such a lovely gift from God. They do so much for us but never appear to be claiming stuff they've done for us.
I'll make sure to never hurt them again. :)
Keep writing, you're doing really good!
this is an amazing reminder and tribute that everyone should take into account. so often we take our parents for granted when in the end who do we really have other than our families?
i think you can eliminate the third stanza completely as to make this more poetic and less conversational. really great work overall!
Firstly,It really touched my heart and soul :)
I really love my parents but show it to them very less..
that's the problem I have to solve soon :)
This poem teaches me,inspires me and shows me a positive way of looking at things :)
I loved your poem saumya :)
I feel that I can never be as good as my parents are!!
but i will always try to be :)
Now a days lots of children want to move away from their parents especially after marriage :(
Which I feel is the most heart breaking situation for any parent...
The parents who struggle there whole life to give a good atmosphere for their children to grow stronger...sometimes they haven't eat food because we are sad or we are away from them :(
Wonderfully written!! Keep writing!! Keep smiling :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
thank you soooooooooooooo much....
its really a great honour for me...that my words can transf.. read morethank you soooooooooooooo much....
its really a great honour for me...that my words can transform lives into positive and great one...!!!
a grand thanks once again..!!
Hi all:)
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