Pain...From A Parents Heart

Pain...From A Parents Heart

A Poem by Saumya
"

all the feelings arising in a parent's heart

"


Parents, you know,
are the first, and the best angels,
we get in our life......

They do everything for us,
but in turn,want nothing,
except the love and care,
they always have been giving..

So, here are the thoughts,
which i today,
want to share with you all,
on our parent's hearts behalf....

They give us birth,
but never say, that
its because of them, that
we are on this earth..!

They give us life,
but never say, that
its because of them,that
we are alive...!

Our mother feeds us,
with the first milk,
which you already know,
is so essential, for
the child's good health,
but she never says,that
its because of it,
that you aren't ill...!

They firmly hold our fingers,
and teach us to walk,
but they never say, that
its because of them, that
we today, can properly walk..!

They are our first teachers,
but they never say,  that
without their assistance,
we would be big losers....!

They teach us, how
to earn our living,
but never say, that
without their help, we
could be nothing...!

They are always with us,
like a protective shield,
preventing us from the harshness,
this world yields...
but never say, that
without their protection,
we could be completely lonely....!

When you get hurt,
they feel the pain,
more than you,
but still encourage you, that
it will soon be rescued,
without even saying, that
they feel it more than you....!

They do so much for you,
more than what, they can
actually do,
because, my friends,
they really love you.....!

But sadly, at some phases,
we do such things,
that we actually,
shouldn't do...

They care for you, love you ,
and this is why, they are
concerned for you....
But this at times,
becomes, a source of  irritation,
and disgust,
for the children,
who are so called...
'Grown up', till then....!

The love, care, and concern,
that they once gave, and
hoped for,
goes in vain.....
the gown up child,
now called, 'A man'..
sees them as a big burden....
and feels, that
life could be much better,
without their existence.....!

So, friends, let me remind you,
at this instance, that,
you too were, at some
phase of life....
Children...!
completely helpless, crying deeply and bitterly,
for the love, warmth, and concern...
which was later, only
given to you,
by your parents.....!

so why, in their old age,
when they have turned
emotionally and mentally into children,
you can't understand them..?
can't love them..?
and deprive them, of
that love and concern, which
should actually be given to them...?

and most essentially,
what is it, which makes you hate
them then.....?
is it their Love, Care, Warmth and Concern.....!!

But still, they don't won't hate you,
my dear friends,
because, you never know, but
they were, and always be your best friends,
who are with you from the beginning,
till the end...!

So, my dear readers and friend,
i humbly urge you,
please, please, please,
never ever hurt,
these lovely angels again...
and if you already have,
please ask them,
to forgive you then....
and you will be pardoned....!

and if you don't,
forget it, that you will
afford heaven.....!

for God never forgives the people,
who hate their parents....!

© 2013 Saumya


Author's Note

Saumya
i hope this one will definitely touch the strings of your heart, and i really hpoe that you really loved reading this....!!
please review and rate it..!!
regards,
saumya

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I think about on the bad I've done for my parents and still undeniably and indubitably I still end up doing it out of their spite. It's one to know when to stop and stare and be just a good son but I find myself having a hard time to accept it. Sad but a truly lovely piece for sure. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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I loved the length of this one..
Sometimes, when we have soo many feelings.. We can write up a whole book.. or just end up in a word..

Thatz nice sharing Saumya.. This shows your respect and love towards your parents
Godji Bless you and your family :)



Posted 11 Years Ago


truly it has the string of my hearts and i loved it awesomeeeeeeeeeeee

Posted 11 Years Ago


A little utopian I think.. depends on what kind of parents you had.. we got yelled at quite often "I brought you into this world and I can take you out of it" Just thought you should know not all parents are roses.. some are the thorns..

Otherwise.. nice poem

Posted 11 Years Ago


smilempsn

11 Years Ago

I guess every parent has that quality of saying it some time or other time 'I brought you into this .. read more
Nicely written and a very good poem on parents behalf.

Posted 11 Years Ago


A little long, but really did touch my heart, parents, such a lovely gift from God. They do so much for us but never appear to be claiming stuff they've done for us.
I'll make sure to never hurt them again. :)
Keep writing, you're doing really good!

Posted 11 Years Ago


this is an amazing reminder and tribute that everyone should take into account. so often we take our parents for granted when in the end who do we really have other than our families?

i think you can eliminate the third stanza completely as to make this more poetic and less conversational. really great work overall!

Posted 11 Years Ago


That was so amazing ....
I love my mother so much so is my dad

Posted 11 Years Ago


A wonderful tribute, well penned.

Posted 11 Years Ago


it's a touching poetry... and definitely reached the corners of my heart

Posted 11 Years Ago


Firstly,It really touched my heart and soul :)
I really love my parents but show it to them very less..
that's the problem I have to solve soon :)
This poem teaches me,inspires me and shows me a positive way of looking at things :)
I loved your poem saumya :)
I feel that I can never be as good as my parents are!!
but i will always try to be :)
Now a days lots of children want to move away from their parents especially after marriage :(
Which I feel is the most heart breaking situation for any parent...
The parents who struggle there whole life to give a good atmosphere for their children to grow stronger...sometimes they haven't eat food because we are sad or we are away from them :(
Wonderfully written!! Keep writing!! Keep smiling :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Saumya

11 Years Ago

thank you soooooooooooooo much....
its really a great honour for me...that my words can transf.. read more
Akshat♥

11 Years Ago

No problem...keep smiling!! :)

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