Pain...From A Parents Heart

all the feelings arising in a parent's heart

Parents, you know,
are the first, and the best angels,
we get in our life......

They do everything for us,
but in turn,want nothing,
except the love and care,
they always have been giving..

So, here are the thoughts,
which i today,
want to share with you all,
on our parent's hearts behalf....

They give us birth,
but never say, that
its because of them, that
we are on this earth..!

They give us life,
but never say, that
its because of them,that
we are alive...!

Our mother feeds us,
with the first milk,
which you already know,
is so essential, for
the child's good health,
but she never says,that
its because of it,
that you aren't ill...!

They firmly hold our fingers,
and teach us to walk,
but they never say, that
its because of them, that
we today, can properly walk..!

They are our first teachers,
but they never say,  that
without their assistance,
we would be big losers....!

They teach us, how
to earn our living,
but never say, that
without their help, we
could be nothing...!

They are always with us,
like a protective shield,
preventing us from the harshness,
this world yields...
but never say, that
without their protection,
we could be completely lonely....!

When you get hurt,
they feel the pain,
more than you,
but still encourage you, that
it will soon be rescued,
without even saying, that
they feel it more than you....!

They do so much for you,
more than what, they can
actually do,
because, my friends,
they really love you.....!

But sadly, at some phases,
we do such things,
that we actually,
shouldn't do...

They care for you, love you ,
and this is why, they are
concerned for you....
But this at times,
becomes, a source of  irritation,
and disgust,
for the children,
who are so called...
'Grown up', till then....!

The love, care, and concern,
that they once gave, and
hoped for,
goes in vain.....
the gown up child,
now called, 'A man'..
sees them as a big burden....
and feels, that
life could be much better,
without their existence.....!

So, friends, let me remind you,
at this instance, that,
you too were, at some
phase of life....
Children...!
completely helpless, crying deeply and bitterly,
for the love, warmth, and concern...
which was later, only
given to you,
by your parents.....!

so why, in their old age,
when they have turned
emotionally and mentally into children,
you can't understand them..?
can't love them..?
and deprive them, of
that love and concern, which
should actually be given to them...?

and most essentially,
what is it, which makes you hate
them then.....?
is it their Love, Care, Warmth and Concern.....!!

But still, they don't won't hate you,
my dear friends,
because, you never know, but
they were, and always be your best friends,
who are with you from the beginning,
till the end...!

So, my dear readers and friend,
i humbly urge you,
please, please, please,
never ever hurt,
these lovely angels again...
and if you already have,
please ask them,
to forgive you then....
and you will be pardoned....!

and if you don't,
forget it, that you will
afford heaven.....!

for God never forgives the people,
who hate their parents....!

Author's Note

i hope this one will definitely touch the strings of your heart, and i really hpoe that you really loved reading this....!!
please review and rate it..!!
regards,
saumya

Reviews

[Zero_Edge88]

I think about on the bad I've done for my parents and still undeniably and indubitably I still end up doing it out of their spite. It's one to know when to stop and stare and be just a good son but I find myself having a hard time to accept it. Sad but a truly lovely piece for sure. :)

[KaylasPoetryBook]

So nicely written, it's so easy to take our parent(s) for granted but sometimes we have to humble ourselves and remember who got us here! I loved this piece (:

[Aristede Craig Jr]

O my you know I'm emotional... Gosh ... Beautiful... Because we get tired but they
Never got to be tired when raising us... Lovely

[ayosonolowo]

I love this please keep it up, kudus.

[Rosaria_V]

I loved this!! I think its so sweet and I can so relate to this. I love my parents very much and the picture is darling!! Very well done!!

[Saumya]

thank you soo much dear:)

[dw817]

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These words are inspirational and moving and yet - unfortunately, I fully believe with the state many teenagers and children are today, not only will they not understand it, they will refuse to make an effort to do so.

It is only when their parents are stricken from them do they long to have them, and for all the reasons you have listed, and more. Why must we be so stubborn at such an age so as not to listen to our elders. To do as they say, not as they do, and be glad to have them in our lives at all.

I ask all of you ... ?

[Katho28]

this one really did touch my heart!!! sometimes when I get angry or frustrated with my parents, I regret it later when I realise just how much they've done for me... I agree wholeheartedly with what you've written in this poem :)

[Amaya Sullivan]

This is a very nice poem. It's very true. My favorite stanza:

They are always with us,
like a protective shield,
preventing us from the harshness,
this world yields...
but never say, that
without their protection,
we could be completely lonely....!

[Angel]

It did, indeed, touch the strings of my heart!
I hear parents say all the time "I ask for nothing from my children."
Too often, "nothing" is exactly what they get...

Sadly, too many aging parents are left to die alone, either in nursing homes, or at home, in the care of strangers.
Kids, this should not be. God, Who knows our hearts, watches sadly...
And it is as you say...if you do not care for your parents, you will not be welcomed into Heaven...

Thank you for this lovely piece!

[Dr. Wood ?]

Many truths here Saumya

I have been working upon a similar theme

You are truly an honest and loving person, this shines