You never know what will life be the next day, so, please enjoy whatever comes your way.
You never know who will help you the next day, so,please don't hate anyone today..
You never know who will leave you the next day, so, please enjoy the time, you have with them today.. so that, you don't have to regret the other days..!
You never know what will you be the next day, so, appreciate yourself, for what you are today..
You never know who will meet you the next day, so, be the best, as you are today..
You never know who will need your help the next day, so, help everyone always..
You never know what will you get the next day, so, give the most of what you can, to everyone today...
You never know what will you turn to be one day, so, just count your blessings everyday, love everyone the most you can today and each day..
You never know what will happen to you the next day, so, thank God, for the life, he has given to you today..
For life is a path, filled with blotches and pits in its ways so please enjoy,and give it your best each day..
As you never know, how it will be the next day, so, please enjoy, enjoy and enjoy.. the most you can today...
because, these opportunities, will not always knock on your way..
so, live to the fullest you can today..! and enjoy,enjoy whatever comes your way.
'You Never Know'
Saumya,
What a great title! Your optimism is lovely. We all can use a little emotional sunshine sometimes. A reminder of what is possible if we do not give up. Life is for living and it can be easy to become stagnant if we loose sight of others.
Blessings,
Kathy
A poem always should have a good rhythm and you maintained it here in this poem without compromising the purpose of literatre, the message...Thanks for sharing it
You have given some tremendous advice here...if only we are wise enough to listen.
One day at a time is enough for me!
Thank you for sharing this lovely piece!
I'd take into account spelling, tenses, conjunctive adverbs, predicate verbs and other English subject stuff but, I SPELL check I and never received higher than C+ in the subject. No rater here. I just enjoyed the write, enjoyed the subject, and took the advice. Tom
Life written by a young woman who knows how to live and how to be. We should always remember that every day is a miracle and a privilege. ' thank God, for the life, ~ he has given to you today..'
Again this is a lovely poem reflecting your faith and its effect on your outlook on life. You surely must be a treasure to your friends. It seems you are always poised to comfort or help or encourage or save. Very beautiful. There is only one thing I would change and that is the word "blotches" in the phrase "filled with blotches and pits in its ways." Something about that doesn't seamlessly contribute to the mood. Otherwise, wonderful.
sounds like excellent advice, put gleefully into very poetic verse. i think sometimes some of us become too invested in ourselves and forget about others....then everyone loses their way...i really like this piece, well penned!
Hi all:)
this is me....Saumya
well, i don't have much to tell you all about me..
but yes to start with,
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