If You...

If you  want to be something,
be like a TREE,
which is always.....GIVING

If you want to be something,
be like a FLOWER,
which is always........SMILING

If you want to be something,
be like a FOUNTAIN,
which is always...........CONSISTENTLY TOILING

If you want to be something,
be like a COOL BREEZE
which is always..........PLEASING and SOOTHING

If you want to be something,
be like a great FABLE
which is always..........INTERESTING

If you want to be something,
be like a STAR
which is always..............SHINING

If you want to be something,
be like SKY
which is always.............WITHOUT ENDING

If you want to be something,
be like an ANGEL from God
which is always..............FORGIVING, LOVING, and BLESSING

But yes, my friends,
if you want to be one of these,
which i had been mentioning......

you first need, to be a good
human being...
who is really essential, to
make the atmosphere
around........
serene

so make your world,
something really amazing,
by .......supplying it with great meanings.
from your surroundings.

and be the change,
you and your heart,
had always been ...dreaming..!!

Author's Note

thanks a lot for reading...!!
i will be rally grateful, if you review and rate it..!!
regards
saumya

Reviews

[annie lee]

Again your faith shines through. The analogies (I think I've chosen the right word) are precise and instantly visual -- all symbols available to everyone and thus easy to mimic the benign influences. Your use of colored text keeps the reader's eye interested. Your gentle spirituality should be bottled and distributed worldwide. The last stanzas sweep the reader up into the thrilling realization that the answer is to change, to be part of the change. Inspirational for any religion and inspirational for a free spirit.

[Katho28]

really liked the repetition of "if you want to be something". again, your poem provides hope and inspiration.. :) good write.. enjoyed :)

[It's Me, The Miracle]

A very good poem with a bunch of messages.....good write....

[Angel]

I will be a flower...not only will I be smiling, but everyone who sees me will also smile. I will waft my fragrance across their world, and bring a bit of joy into dreary lives.
What kind of flower will I be?
I will be a sweet potato vine. I will be beautiful and useful at the same time...

[BlackRose]

Love the color to go with what you are speaking about and intrigues the eyes. Wonderfully done. And yes we must be good to the earth for then it will be good to us. :o)

[Prritiy]

you first need, to be a good
human being...
who is really essential, to
make the atmosphere
around........
serene

rightly said to make everything outside seem right we need to correct ourselves, though at times it doesn't work but with most people around it will, nice, liked it.

[JordanIsaacSmith]

Struggling to find any more words of praise for your work, after reading and reviewing in quick succession! Again, a great read. Your poems have a lyrical quality to them which I enjoy and of course, they're all so full of hope and advice and they're a great source of inspiration as well as a source of comfort. Thank you again for another great poem.

[L.u.c.a.s.]

If you could be any more inspiring, my heart might burst!

[Patrick O'Neil]

The closing line is very strong but yet smooth, love it.
"and be the change,
you and your heart,
had always been ...dreaming..!!"

[smilempsn]

Very nice one saumya :)

[She With Eyes Like Unsh..]

This is a really sweet poem! You are a great poet!