If You...

If you  want to be something,
be like a TREE,
which is always.....GIVING

If you want to be something,
be like a FLOWER,
which is always........SMILING

If you want to be something,
be like a FOUNTAIN,
which is always...........CONSISTENTLY TOILING

If you want to be something,
be like a COOL BREEZE
which is always..........PLEASING and SOOTHING

If you want to be something,
be like a great FABLE
which is always..........INTERESTING

If you want to be something,
be like a STAR
which is always..............SHINING

If you want to be something,
be like SKY
which is always.............WITHOUT ENDING

If you want to be something,
be like an ANGEL from God
which is always..............FORGIVING, LOVING, and BLESSING

But yes, my friends,
if you want to be one of these,
which i had been mentioning......

you first need, to be a good
human being...
who is really essential, to
make the atmosphere
around........
serene

so make your world,
something really amazing,
by .......supplying it with great meanings.
from your surroundings.

and be the change,
you and your heart,
had always been ...dreaming..!!

Author's Note

thanks a lot for reading...!!
i will be rally grateful, if you review and rate it..!!
regards
saumya

Reviews

[annie lee]

Again your faith shines through. The analogies (I think I've chosen the right word) are precise and instantly visual -- all symbols available to everyone and thus easy to mimic the benign influences. Your use of colored text keeps the reader's eye interested. Your gentle spirituality should be bottled and distributed worldwide. The last stanzas sweep the reader up into the thrilling realization that the answer is to change, to be part of the change. Inspirational for any religion and inspirational for a free spirit.

[topsyturvy]

There's a pattern when you write and I'm loving it :)

[Caradoc]

This has a beautiful message in it., which I found pleasant to read. Indeed, we should all strive to be good. We should all strive to be the change we wish to see around us.

Well done.

-Caradoc

[Katseye]

Oh this I really like. strong, thought pervoking! good job

[Ankita]

Your poems are always so thoughtful and this one too gives me such a wonderful feeling while I read. Comparison with and a message to be like those wonderful things from mother nature is noteworthy, gives it a symbolic touch and also makes the poem one wonderful piece reading which gives you immense pleasure. Please turn up with more such thoughts and ideas. Keep writing and thanks for sharing. :)

[MsJewel]

Beautifully uplifting and inspirational. A poem I could read again and again!

:) Julie

[DogDrawler]

I like the way you bolded some words. Very clever. :)

[Jvl narasimharao]

I will be a tree and a flower as you wished.This is a wonderful poem.You are a much better poet for your age.You have got very innovative and noble ideas-the hall mark of a good poet

[L.Edward]

Absolutely wonderful. Thank you for such a wonderful and uplifting poetic experience. I strive to be like this every day. Soothing just by my presence. At first I did it just to free myself from suffering but then I realized that the energy of my positive emotions was releasing others from suffering too. Joy becomes larger than just the sum of its parts.

[Dreamer]

This is a beautiful poem filled with some great analogies. It was also very visual. Nice work!

[Catlen]

This was a very pleasant read.