I Wish

I wish,
everyone on this earth,
be happy..!
I wish,
no one in this world,
be lonely..!
i wish,
everyone on this earth,
gets what they need..!
I wish,
everyone helps the other,
in need..!
i wish,
everyone be away
from greed..!
i wish,
there be no discrimination, on
the basis of cast, color or creed..!

I wish,
everyone is blessed, with
a best friend in need..!
I wish,
no trees ever be, without
leaves...!
I wish,
everyone be gifted, with
eternal peace...!
I wish,
our earth  be enriched,
with greenery...!

i wish,
everything on this earth be, as
it is supposed to be....!
i wish,
every butterfly,
always spreads peace....!
I wish,
the birds always sing,
melodiously.........!


i wish,
our earth be the best place to see,
enriched with,  LOVE, PEACE and HARMONY....!


so that,
one day even when God sees,
he's bound to say.....
"oh, that's heavenly...!!"
this is the best place, i could ever see..
because, here dwells, humanity,
and this is something,
which makes this place, really,
lovely........!!
the real place,
where i should actually be.....
truly.....!

Author's Note

thank you very much for reading.....
please give your reviews and rate it...!!!

Reviews

[annie lee]

You have described Paradise, and if it existed here on Earth, it would be doubly so. I guess I am too cynical to envision this world, since I am blinded by the way it is today. If everyone had your faith, your integrity, your energy -- maybe it would work. You are a beautiful light and I do not wish to dim that in any way. Hold your lamp high, Saumya, and maybe you can begin to change this world. Brava.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

i love this cute little poem...

it made me wanna smile and i felt so good on the inside

and your verse with God was a nice, unique touch :)

[Saumya]

thank you sooooooooooooooooooooo much my dear friend.....!!
:)
reallly loved your review..!!!

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Wonderful piece with a wonderful message.

[smilempsn]

Nice and gentle reminder to the wishes a person can have.. :)
nicely penned down...
Loved the flow and colors added some more meanings to the words..

[Kristin Lee]

Very lighthearted and cheerful. I like the color, it adds just a little something in all the right places. Well done.

[Dana Alsamsam]

this was incredibly sweet and uplifting to read. your positive outlook is so refreshing! i would say, poetically, much of it is very cliche, but you're on your way in the right direction- good job and stay positive!

[Roopal]

Amen.

You write about such positive things. Your write ups are like an activists and we really need poets like you. This poem reflects your sou and all the good things you wish for. Thanks for sharing.

"oh, that's heavenly...!!
this is the best place, i could ever see..
because, here dwells, humanity"

Really nice, keep writing. My best wishes. :)

[quinfinn]

wonderful things to wish for, dear girl. i have wished for them all my life, let's hope your generation gets it right and figures it out in time. nicely penned!

[Coyote Poetry]

"i wish,
our earth be the best place to see,
enriched with, LOVE, PEACE and HARMONY....!"
Thank you the beautiful and hopeful poem. I pray and hope for the same things.
Coyote

[WILDERNESS]

v nicely and beautifully expressed. who wouldn't agree with you...... Best wishes to you

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i wish this also...but unfortunately whoever blew out the candles on the cake, only got half of them blown out...