I Wish

I wish,
everyone on this earth,
be happy..!
I wish,
no one in this world,
be lonely..!
i wish,
everyone on this earth,
gets what they need..!
I wish,
everyone helps the other,
in need..!
i wish,
everyone be away
from greed..!
i wish,
there be no discrimination, on
the basis of cast, color or creed..!

I wish,
everyone is blessed, with
a best friend in need..!
I wish,
no trees ever be, without
leaves...!
I wish,
everyone be gifted, with
eternal peace...!
I wish,
our earth  be enriched,
with greenery...!

i wish,
everything on this earth be, as
it is supposed to be....!
i wish,
every butterfly,
always spreads peace....!
I wish,
the birds always sing,
melodiously.........!


i wish,
our earth be the best place to see,
enriched with,  LOVE, PEACE and HARMONY....!


so that,
one day even when God sees,
he's bound to say.....
"oh, that's heavenly...!!"
this is the best place, i could ever see..
because, here dwells, humanity,
and this is something,
which makes this place, really,
lovely........!!
the real place,
where i should actually be.....
truly.....!

Author's Note

thank you very much for reading.....
please give your reviews and rate it...!!!

Reviews

[annie lee]

You have described Paradise, and if it existed here on Earth, it would be doubly so. I guess I am too cynical to envision this world, since I am blinded by the way it is today. If everyone had your faith, your integrity, your energy -- maybe it would work. You are a beautiful light and I do not wish to dim that in any way. Hold your lamp high, Saumya, and maybe you can begin to change this world. Brava.

[ron]

I wish your wish will come true, maybe one day. In you your wishes that you wished in this poem are true. I would love to visit what you see some day.

[It's Me, The Miracle]

A well constructed poem with a long list of wishes that can make life much easier...Good write soumya.....Keep writing

[Angel]

Oh, my dear...I wish all of these things, too!
But only we can make it so.

[Prritiy]

i wish,
our earth be the best place to see,
enriched with, LOVE, PEACE and HARMONY....!


so that,
one day even when God sees,
he's bound to say.....
"oh, that's heavenly...!!"
this is the best place, i could ever see..
because, here dwells, humanity,
and this is something,
which makes this place, really,
lovely........!!
the real place,
where i should actually be.....
truly.....!


WOW i loved these true feelings, I wish the same.

[JordanIsaacSmith]

This was incredibly well written - "there be no discrimination, on the basis of cast, color or creed..!" - simply superb. You've described a perfect world and as others have said, it may never happen, and it may be too hard to imagine; but if there are people like you in the world, trying to make the world a little brighter in some way, then that's all we need.

[Riding the Rainbow]

Really good poem..
I wish it was possible to have an amazing reality like we both wish..
We can alwasy hope, though.
Well done..

[stars are far]

still wishes... so people dont care about those nice stuff ..they only want to get and no matter what the pay back is ..
well done piece

[kublakhan27]

This has a lyrical feel to it with its sparse rhymes and concise statements...I think it would fit nicely into a song...it also shows that poetry need not always be about doom and gloom, something I should remind myself of more often haha Great work :)

[Patrick O'Neil]

That is a grand wish, and i wish that it was true, If we all wished real hard, and wished the same, perhaps one day it will be,no more a wish but reality.

Great write.:)

[She With Eyes Like Unsh..]

Great job, but watch the grammar!